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I'm happy to announce that Gabatrix: The Wheels of Thunder has been completed. It's been a good five months of work, but the long story is over. Gabatrix: The Wheels of Thunder hits home, quite literally.
Set after the events of Gabatrix: Veleshar, Earth stands alone, as most of the human race have long abandoned the planet. The remaining human survivors are left to fair for themselves, having been handed over to the T'rintar clan as a bargaining chip for the UWA/T'rintar alliance. Earth remains a toxic wasteland, made barren by the deadly pollutants, ashen fallout, and Orange Muck that perforates the oceans and water supplies. However, many of the Earthers have not given up. The survivors continue to live off the landscape despite being left out of the bargaining table. A lone rancher, scavenger, and opportunist prepares to embark on a journey that few dare to try as they continue to live under the confines of their dome sanctuaries.
This is another fan-driven story made to expand Gabatrix's story environment. It's been a while since I posted on Storiesonline, but I have a lot of goodies that have come forth. I have three Gabatrix audiobooks made, with a 4th one coming around the corner. Both Gabatrix: The Violet Wave and Gabatrix: The Silver Rain, final editions have been updated on Storiesonline along with the updates hitting Bookapy as well. These editions are overhauls designed to improve dialogue, remove errors, and overall make the stories better than ever before. Many of your comments to me go a long ways to make Gabatrix better and better. :)
With that said, there are a few things to mention. Some of my disclaimers have a tendency not to get put up when I upload onto Storiesonline. I ask to be respectful and polite. As mentioned in my past blog posts, I don't know if there is an attempt to derail new stories that are posted on Storiesonline or not. Gabatrix: Veleshar might have been a victim to potential troll voter bombing. It slowly crept up, but I noticed that the score was very low at first, almost as if some individuals were trying to leave purposeful 2s or 3s and walking away after each chapter was uploaded (if they were even reading it at all). If it turns out to be true, then I'll have no choice but to take the story down and resubmit it to Storiesonline just to purge the troll votes. Then, if I had the option, I would just remove the ability to vote because some are purposely engaging in sabotage.
I upload my stories on Storiesonline to receive feedback. I always welcome positive and constructive comments, and they become helpful in stories like First Peace, Violet Wave, and Silver Rain, getting a major update in turn. In other words, your words matter to me instead of a number that is only used to encourage or discourage future readers from jumping in. If you like the story, give it a good grade. If it isn't your thing, then there are plenty of other stories that are uploaded by other talented writers to enjoy. I do the best that I can to make content for people to enjoy. As I tried to say in my disclaimers: "The opinions stated in the story may not necessarily reflect the opinions of the author. This is a story. Treat it as such." I have to actually put that up because a few individuals, such as SJWs or other individuals, treat the story extremely seriously. Receiving feedback does a lot in improving the quality of a piece. Never feel afraid to tell me that I made an error in a chapter because mistakes happen. We're human, after all. It's how things improve.
Anyways, thank you for your continued support and supporting the other writers on Storiesonline. Enjoy Gabatrix: The Wheels of Thunder, and stay tuned to Gabatrix: The Last Tank. :)
Gabatrix Website:
https://www.gabatrix.net
For those that are interested in the full story order of my books:
1.) Ariadne and the Tales of Heroes
2.) Ryujin and the Tales of Heroes
3.) Taweret and the Tales of Heroes
4.) Ayida-Weddo and the Tales of Heroes
5.) Helsing and the Tales of Heroes
6.) Gabatrix: Minerva
7.) Opet and the Tales of Heroes
8.) Gabatrix: The First Peace
9.) The Garden of New Olympia (Set around the Gabatrix series)
10.) The Garden of New Olympia 2 (Set around the Gabatrix series)
11.) Gabatrix: The Magenta Racer
12.) Gabatrix: The Violet Wave
13.) Gabatrix: The Silver Rain
14.) Gabatrix: The Terrorists of Batrice
15.) Gabatrix: The Shira Maneuver
16.) Gabatrix: The Warrior of Silence
17.) Gabatrix: The Cipra Campaign
18.) Gabatrix: Legacy
19.) Gabatrix: Relics
20.) Gabatrix: Force and Vehemence
21.) Gabatrix: The Pirates of Palora
22.) Gabatrix: Veleshar
23.) Gabatrix: The Wheels of Thunder
Or just Gabatrix,
1.) Gabatrix: Minerva
2.) Gabatrix: The First Peace
3.) Gabatrix: The Magenta Racer
4.) Gabatrix: The Violet Wave
5.) Gabatrix: The Silver Rain
6.) Gabatrix: The Terrorists of Batrice
7.) Gabatrix: The Shira Maneuver
8.) Gabatrix: The Warrior of Silence
9.) Gabatrix: The Cipra Campaign
10.) Gabatrix: Legacy
11.) Gabatrix: Relics
12.) Gabatrix: Force and Vehemence
13.) Gabatrix: The Pirates of Palora
14.) Gabatrix: Veleshar
15.) Gabatrix: The Wheels of Thunder
I'm happy to report that Gabatrix: Veleshar has been completely uploaded on Storiesonline. Veleshar has been a fun project and fan commission story related to the Gabatrix universe. I also have an exciting array of news: production of Gabatrix: The Violet Wave Audiobook is underway as I work on its final edition, which is being made at the same time.
I've kept my last blog post short because my prior posts keep getting deleted or removed. This removes a lot of the content that I provide to detail the book and future plans I provide.
This brings into another discussion I'm going to make as well. I'm checking the scores and noting that the scores dropped consistently as each chapter dropped. I don't know how Storiesonline has altered their voting system. Supposedly, they got rid of 1 bombing, but I question how they've done it. I'm getting this feeling that someone is waiting for each chapter to drop so they can pop the lowest score they can possibly put in before the system detects that review bombing is taking place. I don't know if that's how the system works or not.
I want to make it clear that I put my stories on Storiesonline so they can be critiqued. I do get constructive and positive feedback, which is always welcome, but a point score voting system accomplishes little. I can wake up and look at my message box, waiting for replies, and instead see scores drop. With the exception of a couple of messages here and there, I have no idea if the readers have an interest in the story, hate it, like it, trolls, attempted sabotage, or if the ones that liked it remained more silent. For all I know, a story dealing with shark women, maybe a reader was bitten by a shark as a kid and downvoted the story because of it. I don't know and all I'm left with is a number.
Veleshar, as of this moment, is the lowest rated story of my Gabatrix stories. Noted, this is based on a smaller number of votes compared to the ones that compiled more. However, I will state that I feel that this story doesn't deserve that. I would have expected the scores to be lower with the first set of stories, when my writing experience and grammatical knowledge was less than it is now. I understand that newcomers will come and go. Gabatrix is such a large universe that some readers will jump into the latest story and ignore the prior stories, which isn't really fair to the overall universe. Veleshar was designed as an expansive piece that introduces some new characters while bringing prior unknown characters to life. Before I was commissioned to write it, I originally had no intentions of writing a story for Shira's mother, but as I began planning the story months before writing, I felt that a good story could come from it, including coming up with her ship design, and a story to circulate around it, her, and the characters as well. The book became more than that. It served as a small bridge gap between a future planned prequel series of Gabatrix that would focus on the unknown characters of the past.
While I may have less issue with a fan-commissioned story, I still take some notice to possible attempted derailment. Understand, if I had it my way, I would disable the voting block, especially if there is an attempt to potentially sabotage it. I understand, that not everyone would like a story where a human is having fun with alien women, but there are others that would, which is why I write about it. :)
Know that your constructive feedback matters. To give you an idea, when I started production of Gabatrix: The First Peace Audiobook, I also did a Final Edition overhaul of Gabatrix: The First Peace. With + four years of writing experience under my belt, your messages to me, and Grammarly in tow, I committed to an overhaul of the story. I began to trim the fat, cutting down unnecessary repeated concepts, fix errors, improve dialogue and improve the overhaul quality of the story. The First Peace, Final Edition has been uploaded onto Storiesonline recently and used as the script for the audiobook. Your prior messages to me are used to take note as I go through this overhaul. Even, now a Final Edition overhaul is coming forth to the Violet Wave. In the end, I feel that it's a difference between night and day taking a good story and making it better.
So I ask of this, give Gabatrix: Veleshar a chance. It's about a man who meets the love of his dreams and decides to transfer over to her ship to be with her and her crew. If you're into human and anthro relations then check it out. You might enjoy it more than you realize. If you like the story, then give it a good grade. If it isn't your thing, then there are plenty of other stories out there that the community on Storiesonline write. Don't be mean and bash it by slapping a low grade just because it isn't the thing you prefer in a story. If there are issues, then message me and be professional about it. I don't bite and always thank the people that point out the errors and mistakes that come along the way because that's how constructive feedback works.
I don't let this get to me, but I know the score system is one that can deter potential newcomers. Trolls will be trolls and its their way to extend a middle finger to the people who spend months of writing and work just to have someone slap a downvote in two seconds and walk away. Gabatrix has been a success on multiple fronts because of the fans that support it. Even the audiobooks was all in due thanks to the fans that helped make it happen. Fanwork has even been sprouting outward because of the success that the stories bring forth. I can more than promise that Gabatrix will continue after Veleshar with Gabatrix: The Wheels of Thunder. Thank you for spending your time in reading this and enjoy Gabatrix and its stories. :)
For the full order list of the Gabatrix books, it is:
1.) Gabatrix: Minerva
2.) Gabatrix: The First Peace
3.) Gabatrix: The Magenta Racer
4.) Gabatrix: The Violet Wave
5.) Gabatrix: The Silver Rain
6.) Gabatrix: The Terrorists of Batrice
7.) Gabatrix: The Shira Maneuver
8.) Gabatrix: The Warrior of Silence
9.) Gabatrix: The Cipra Campaign
10.) Gabatrix: Legacy
11.) Gabatrix: Relics
12.) Gabatrix: Force and Vehemence
13.) Gabatrix: The Pirates of Palora
14:) Gabatrix: Veleshar
My prior post was taken down. I will make this short in case this one might get taken down too. I'm tired of writing posts just to see them removed.
- Gabatrix: Veleshar is being uploaded on Storiesonline.
- Gabatrix: The First Peace, Final Edition has been uploaded on Storiesonline since it was made for the audiobook (That isn't an advertisement).
I want to thank the readers who read and enjoy the stories. Please don't delete this post. Thank you.
I'm happy to announce that Gabatrix: The Pirates of Palora, is now available to read. It will officially be the 20th book that will be published on Amazon in a few weeks. Set after the events of Gabatrix: Force and Vehemence, The Lifen crew returns to confront the criminal elements in the Paloran star system. The Nova Pirates and rogues continue to grow in strength while ravaging commercial vessels, corrupting administrative figures, and terrorizing civilians alike. It's up to Shira, Javier, and Stone to help confront these pirates and make the system safe for everyone before the system becomes too unruly for civilization to continue.
With the upcoming year, I'm happy to look back and know that in the course of 12 months, three books were written, and Gabatrix: Minerva, the audiobook, has been made and is currently on Audible. I got a wonderful voiceactress who's doing the reading along with Antonio Aguirre, the soundman from the Blue Man Group, who makes the music. Punching through the audiobook barrier alone is a major and wonderful step in getting Gabatrix more and more well-known to the public. It allows more accessibility for all who have other things to do in their day-to-day lives while also providing the visually impaired a chance to enjoy Gabatrix. The challenges overcome in having it made have now been made easier for each one to be made in turn.
So the question is, what's next? Pirates of Palora was a major step in getting back into the full swing of Gabatrix after finishing up Helsing and the Tales of Heroes (Something else that will be a benefit in reading, especially when getting into this story). 2024 is looking to be a dozy of year, especially with the political turmoil that is bound to come to some of our doorsteps. For those affected by it, know that I sympathize as we knuckle down and prepare for the coming wave. However, on the side of writing, I'm happy to announce four upcoming Gabatrix books, all in step where each one ends. My goal for 2024 is to continue expanding upon Gabatrix, with four new stories planned. The next story, Gabatrix: Veleshar, and another Gabatrix story (Dealing with Las Vegas) after that are all thanks to fan commissions that will add to the entire universe's lore as a whole. More and more ideas are always considered, and if they don't appear in one book, they will certainly be saved and ready for the next. In a sense, Gabatrix and Tales of Heroes are designed to be expanded almost indefinitely.
Another big goal is to continue forth in the realm of audiobooks, with Gabatrix: The First Peace beginning in production in about a few more weeks. Afterward, it will be Gabatrix: The Violet Wave, where I'm hoping that the voice actress will be able to nail Shira's tone and character down perfectly. With each audiobook being made also comes forth new music, with Ambassador Ifra's theme ready and currently waiting on the animation to be completed before uploading it, along with a battle theme for the audiobook nearing completion. As more and more support comes forth, so do the melodies that add along with it.
I'm also happy to see that fans are enjoying Gabatrix so much that fanart is starting to come forth. If you are ever interested, I don't mind adding lore to these, showcasing them onto Gabatrix.net, and coming up with mini-stories as each one comes out. Little things like that all goes to making Gabatrix get bigger and bigger.
Know that your support always matters. I always upload my stories onto Storiesonline so that others can point out mistakes. I always seek positive or constructive criticism. Don't be afraid to point out little errors. In a book of 160,000 words, no doubt something is going to slip through. In turn, the errors are corrected before I eventually put them out on Amazon, Bookapy, etc.
In the meantime, stay positive, have a Happy New Year, and enjoy Gabatrix: The Pirates of Palora. :)
Hello to everyone. I figured I'd let everyone know that the latest story of my Tales of Heroes is now being uploaded onto Storiesonline. Helsing and the Tales of Heroes is the continuation of Ayida-Weddo and the Tales of Heroes. I needed to take a break from Gabatrix to get another Tales of Heroes book made. It also allows me to defuse a little bit so I can come back more fresh to the series that I know people enjoy. Plus, Helsing and the Tales of Heroes will be something that will benefit the future Gabatrix stories to come.
Of course, this gets into a topic that I have to state is quite obvious. Upon uploading the first two chapters, I've received a large set of votes (almost more than some of my other stories within just two chapters), making this story the worst-rated story of the twenty stories I have written so far, at least at the time of this blog post. I know that this can be temporary as more and more chapters come flooding in. I also don't focus on it too much since Storiesonline's voting system is pretty much broken. Honestly, I was almost expecting the low ratings at this point since they took away the ability to remove voting for writers. It allows individuals to vote early when stories aren't even completely uploaded.
While the goal of Storiesonline has been to resolve the voting issues and claim that it's there to stop "troll voting" and one-bombers (which has to a point), there are ways to get around it. There are always ways to get around any foolproof system. If people see that they can't give 1 out 5 stars for something, then they will give it a 2. I'm well aware of the concept of rating sabotage. While I believe there are good people on Storiesonline, I know that others are jumping onto Helsing and blasting it before it even bears fruit.
I want to make it clear that I do believe there are wonderful individuals, and I have received positive comments about my story. Helsing and the Tales of Heroes is more than just a book of the Tales of Heroes universe. It's a dedication to the many vampire stories out there and the writers that write about them, utilizing many of the popular, past-known older stories to mend into one (no different than how many others write vampire stories). However, I also know that some people have short attention spans. I received harassment in the past either from SJWs, "Sensitive Readers", or people who think they are righteous by going after people who think are encouraging deviant behavior for or against current social norms or agendas. I have to debate with myself whether, when I look at the scores if it's an attempt to extend a middle finger to me or not. I have to ask myself if the voter looked at the disclaimers and voted then and there about what they think about me or my story without even reading it. Is it revenge voting because I didn't write the next installment of Gabatrix? Or is it an attempt to bash me because my stories have vampires in them? For newcomers, the scores can make or break someone telling others that the story is worth reading or not.
What people don't realize is that I originally had an old story that I removed from Ayida-Weddo and the Tales of Heroes. This was done because I wasn't pleased with how the story went. It was too big and inflated an already large book as it was. However, I also felt that it would be a good story once it was refined. I took the Story of Lilith away from the book and did a complete overhaul. In the original story, Lilith practically raped her husband. Looking at it today, I just didn't like it. So I took the entire heart of the story and rewrote it, freshened it, shortened it, and made it into a consensual love story while still carrying the action and main story to circulate around it. It's almost a difference between night and day. It's been incorporated into Helsing and the Tales of Heroes and adds to a vampire-centric lore and concept. If anything, I feel that Helsing and the Tales of Heroes and all its backstories contribute to a singular main story goal, something that some of the other Tales of Heroes have struggled with at times to achieve.
I've had past blog posts stating the same thing, and I know it's like beating a dead horse. Some on Storiesonline will make sure certain stories or story writers remain at the top by whatever means necessary. I don't see any hope of seeing my stories in the top 10, and perhaps I speak out for the other writers on this site as well. I care for everyone and know what it's like to make and write stories. Some are beginners, some are novices, and some have been Emmy award-winning storywriters. I don't let the scores really get to me, and I'm aware of the fact that scores can naturally rise as well as the story nears completion. If anything, I have made great successes with an upcoming audiobook for Gabatrix: Minerva coming around the corner in a few weeks to come, all in due thanks to the fans who support me. But I do ask all of you to support your writers, especially at this time. Make Storiesonline a positive environment for writers. Enjoy Helsing and the Tales of Heroes, for I think it's a story that you may genuinely like.
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