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The first chapters of the new story have been sent to thet Moderators for posting.

The story opens a month or so after school had started when Marianne and Will are separately invited to go partying with some of the other students at CSM. They had been partying for several hours, when others started trouble with them. Mare stops it, but they decide to leave the bar.

Will befriends Mare on the way back to school, but then doesn't see her for several days until going to the gym early one morning. What he sees shocks him. A short time later, three men enter looking for Mare and trouble. They leave after a short time, having seen what she can do.

Will later chats her up after class about how she handled the three men. He is very understanding of her desire to stay out of trouble.

A week or so later, a very large man arrives looking for Mare and trouble. He finds her and it, but not the way that he expected. The police rule that it was self-defense.

Will is again the one who looks after her. Later she explains why she is so worried about hurting the people and things here on Terra. Following classes that day, Will had questions about some of their school work and is invited up to her room. He learns more about her and life on Telchines. They remain good friends.

Several weeks later, Mare invites him up to her room on a Friday night. she is interested in having sex with him. They each explain about the differences in the way sex is perceived on their planets. Mare is still worried about injuring him and explains some of her previous experiences with breaking things here. They eventually do have sex, but need to change positions. Later Mare reminds him, that they need to workout in the morning.

This story has been quite some time in appearing, as I stopped work on it to write several other stories that have appeared here. The first part was easy to write, but later chapters required a lot of research. I'll explain more fully when we get to them.

Enjoy these chapter, more next week.

Keep Well,
uncle jim

I plan on starting to post a new story - 'Marianne' next Friday, if the editing of the final two chapters continues to go well.

This story was started in mid 2016 and was worked on with interruptions until mid 2017, when it was put aside in favor of other stories that I was more interested in working on. There were seven and a half chapters completed then.

Earlier this year, I decided that I needed to finish it and started on the remaining chapters. It turned out that the final two chapters were much more research intensive than I had imagined, and it has required several months to complete the story. I hope that you will enjoy it.

Keep Well,
uncle jim

The new chapters have been sent to the Moderators for posting.

The final chapters of the story open with Thorne returning the Grroz to their reality, before he and Grace clean up, break camp, and store their camping gear. On returning to the house on Camino Bosque Dr, he calls Mr Hill to inform him that they have finished their mission. Hill is anxious to get a hold of the device, but Thorne drops his demands on him before telling him about the Grroz.

Following the call, Hill contacts his boss, starting a chain of events that inconveniences a lot of people that night, as they prepare to clean up the mess and remove the device.

Early the next morning, Thorne and Grace check on who has arrived and what they are doing. Mr Hill arrives at 10:00 and delivers the money. At the site, a number of people are sick on seeing what is there. Thorne and Grace escape while Hill and the Nuclear Response Team are examining the device.

Later they return to the hotel at Big Bear Lake, but leave the next day for Dallas. In Dallas, they contact Paul and give him the Cartel money they found.

Hill and the CIA are still unable to locate them, and the Director is upset on learning that they were taken in by the Russian Mafia.

Grace and Thorne go to Cincinnati to visit the Kotros and store their weapons. They are helped to secure travel tickets to LA, Japan, and Thailand as well as passport help in Japan.

While they are traveling, the CIA is still looking for them but they are soon distracted by the missing Plutonium from the device.

In the Postscript, we learn what Thorne and Grace do over the next seven years.

Of course, there is much more going on in the story than is covered in this short outline. Read the chapters to get all of the details.

I hope that you have enjoyed reading The Master Warrior. I am currently working on several stories and hope to have one finished and appearing here soon.

Keep Well,
uncle jim

The new chapters have been sent to the Moderators for posting.

This week's chapters open with Thorne and Grace leaving the hotel to begin their surveillance of the area where they suspect the Cartels have the device.

That evening Thorne goes hunting in his original form, after they set up their camp and begin observations. On Tuesday they observe the guards being doubled, before they begin their reconnaissance that night. They especially check out one house on Camino Bosque Dr.

Later that night, they check out the burned buildings and learn what they contain.

Mr. Hill and his team arrived on Saturday morning, but aren't detected by the Cartel watchers until Monday. Their message isn't delivered until Tuesday.

on Wednesday, there is more observations and another reconnaissance further down Baldwin Lake Dr. Little happens on Thursday morning.

Meanwhile, Raul arrives in LA and receives a call that the negotiations have broken down. So does Mr. Hill who sets things in motion to detect the arrival of the device in LA.

Raul arrived at the house on Camino Bosque and receives a call about the preparations being made around LA. Things come to a head quickly after this as the Cartels gather their men.

Soon Thorne opens the gate and the Grroz arrive. The Cartel men arrive at the buildings, and Thorne sends the Grroz after them. The Cartel leaders take refuge in the building with the device, and Thorne and Grace have to dig them out, while the Grroz deal with the rest of the Cartel's men. They eventually reach the device.

Of course there is a lot more going on than what I have mentioned in this brief outline. Read the chapters to get the full story. Next week the remainder of the story.

Keep Well,

uncle jim

The new chapters have been sent to the Moderators for posting.

This week's chapters open with Thorne and Grace getting settled in their hotel room and checking out the various facilities of the hotel before going to dinner.

In the morning they exercise and spar outside before breakfast. On setting out after eating, they are immediately assaulted by the sound of motorbikes. They decide that wheels will be quicker than walking for their recon and rent an off-road vehicle.

Arriving on Baldwin Lake Road, they check out the subdivision east of the road that was most affected by the forest fire. Their curiosity is aroused by a group of six burned out buildings. Later they check out other areas. Over dinner, Grace brings up several points.

Sunday they relax but are soon board, and go to check out several of the campgrounds near Big Bear Lake. At one, Thorne detects another Immortal. They meet with him and have an interesting discussion. Later at dinner, Thorne discusses the implications of what they have learned.

The next morning, they prepare to set out on their reconnaissance.

Meanwhile, the CIA is still trying to track where Thorne and Grace have been and what they are doing. It is decided to send Mr. Hill to the West Coast to supervise things there.

Enjoy these chapters. More to follow next week.

Keep Well,
uncle jim