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The first chapters of the new story have been sent to the Moderators for posting.
The story opens with Dallas and Doreen explaining their childhood and formative years to some of those in college with them.
Later, they learn that a friend has disappeared while visiting Miami. They arrange to go to Miami to look for her. Their parents company, Dragon Security, supplies them with some information on their friend.
They investigate the place she was last seen and deal with the kidnappers in typical Dragon Witch fashion, if a bit more violently than their mother would have.
Dallas and Doreen have been Dragon Witches and Ley Line Magic users for some time, and they are closer to their Dragons in some respects than their parents originally were. They are also hot and horny young human females. It makes for an interesting combination.
This was a fun story to write. Enjoy these two chapters. More next week.
Keep Well,
uncle jim
I became aware recently that my story Parthas has been nominated in both the Science Fiction and the Fantasy categories of the Clitorides Awards.
This has happened before with other stories and it splits the vote. However, you the readers could vote for it twice, if you were inclined too, as it is in two different categories. The decision is up to you.
Keep Well,
uncle jim
Myrna is a very old story of mine. A reader recently sent me a spelling correction which caused me to check out the entire story. I wasn't happy with the unposted corrections, and some changes and additions that had also never been posted. I have gone over the entire story and am re-posting it in corrected form.
A Very Happy New Year to all of the readers and authors on Stories on Line.
Keep Well,
uncle jim
To all of the authors and readers of Stories On Line, the Very Merriest of Christmases and the Very Happiest and Most Prosperous of New Year's.
Coming soon Dragon Daughters.
Stay safe and Keep Well,
uncle jim
The new chapters have been sent to the Moderators for posting.
The final chapters open with Hollie and Jacob creating a Charitable Foundation for him to continue his work.
Eventually Jacob's labor results in a place for abused young women to recover. Soon Jacob and the Foundation become involved with CPS (Child Protective Services). The case involves a four year old girl. The results are not good.
Years later, there is another serious run-in with CPS. The results are even worse.
The story in the book that young Hollie has been reading ends with a page listing Jacob's death. The following page lists Hollie's death. The story doesn't end there however, as the young girl's mother comes in and relates the remainder of the story.
This story has the saddest ending that I have ever written. I normally try to end my stories with a happy or upbeat ending. That wasn't possible with this story. Still, I think it shows the love that Jacob and Hollie had for each other, as either would do anything for the other. It also reveals the sadness in those left behind to grieve for them.
I hope that you found the story interesting or at least thought provoking, though the ending is less than happy or enjoyable.
Keep Well,
uncle jim
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