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The new chapters have been sent to the Moderators for posting.
In this week's chapters, we learn how Hollie does in school and with her religious studies.
There is a problem also with her turning into a young woman, as she grows older. At 14, she is interested in sex and leads Jake into it with her. She had very good teachers.
When she is 16 disaster strikes and Jake is jailed while Hollie is taken away. Jake spends a number of days in jail before a lawyer explains things to him. There is more trouble when he is released. He does learn what the cause of all of the trouble is. It doesn't help and he is fired from his job.
Later he is told to be at a specific place at a specific time by the lawyer. There is a surprise waiting for him there.
Even later, he receives another call to be at a specific place at a certain time. He is confused by this, but follows the instructions with surprising results.
I wish to thank all of those who read the initial chapters of the story for your interest, and also those who sent me very encouraging emails. Enjoy these chapters. More next week.
Keep Well,
uncle jim
The initial chapters of the new story have been sent to the Moderators for posting.
The new story opens with Jacob in a quandary on what to do with the young girl that he has rescued. Eventually, he decides that she IS his responsibility, and he needs to take care of her. Later he introduces her to everyone as his daughter from a former marriage.
The first few chapters of this story were fairly easy to write. It was only on reaching the mid and later chapters that it became more difficult to get the feelings that I wanted the story to portray on paper. I knew the end of the story even before I started writing it. How to get those feeling across to the reader was the question. I'm sure you the readers will decide if I have succeeded.
Enjoy these chapter. More next week, as the writing has been completed and only a little editing remains.
Keep Well,
uncle jim
My computer went down for a hard drive and a bad video card. Am back up now but still getting everything in order and back the way my old computer was. Am doing a little writing, but need to catch up putting it in the computer.
Keep Well,
uncle jim
The new chapter has been sent to the Moderators for posting.
This final chapter of Dragon Wytch is rather lengthy and opens with Maddy and Ken dining out, but not in the usual fashion.
During Matty's OB/GYN appointment, we learn a number of interesting things.
The following day a number of Dragon offspring arrive seeking direction from the Dragon Queen. Ken suggests what they could do. Later other offspring arrive with a much different agenda. The Queens in the Jewel take a much different approach to them. Maddy settles things, and they learn more interesting things.
The following day, the Queens in the Jewel have their demonstration, which is recorded by David De Tocqueville and members of the Executive Committee. The demonstration is quite effective.
To finance their Security Company business, Maddy advertises some gold and jewels for sale. With the money raised, they open their business. Later Maddy delivers her twins before Book 3 ends.
I hope that you have enjoyed the Ley Line Witch series so far. There is a Book 4 planned, but I am taking a break for the present time. Over the last three years I have posted 11 stories on SOL. This has taken up the majority of my time. I wish to pursue other interests for a while, but will do some writing along the way, as I have a number of stories in progress. They will not appear as quickly as the previous stories have. I wish you all well in the interim.
Keep Well,
uncle jim
The new chapters have been sent to the Moderators for posting.
This weeks chapters open with Maddy's experiencing morning sickness. Sunday afternoon David and the Executive Council address the Mayor and City Council.
Maddy locates an OB/GYN on Monday. There is also an attack by a pair of Dragons. They are dealt with, and Maddy spends the next three days in discussions with the Queens of the Past.
Meanwhile, David and the Executive Council are trying to figure out what went on.
Eventually, Maddy explains to Ken what she learned from the Queens, and what she explained to them. Later, they go flying in their Dragon form but around Atlanta.
Monday of the next week begins with trouble and gets worse. Dragons are arriving from all over and are ready to fight. Maddy must stop them. She is assisted in that by the Spirits of Magic. During the Dragon war that follows, Maddy chases and catches the one-eyed Green Dragon. Later there is much repair and restoration work to do in Atlanta.
The Narrative changes many times during these two chapters, and you will need to pay close attention to who is speaking.
Enjoy these chapters; more next week.
Keep Well,
uncle jim
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