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FATAL FLAW IN RETRIBUTION

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A reader just mailed me news of a fatal flaw in Retribution. It destroys something that is central to the entire story. I made an assumption without checking a fact and this is all my fault.
I have a few options at this point. I can ignore the flaw and just continue on and hope readers suspend belief. Unfortunately, I'm not made that way and I can't do that.
I can just let the final 5 chapters play out and never write about Linda again. That's a possibility.
The third option is to try and write a plausible work around to fix the error.
I'm going with option 3. I am adding two additional chapters to the end of Retribution, making it a 14 chapter story instead of just the 12. This may ruin any possible sequel now. I'll really have to think long and hard if I want to continue further on this after chapter 14 posts.

Editors/Proofreaders Appreciation Day

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Count me in Jay. I only have the one story here, so far, but without the four guys who edited for me it never would have made it. Thanks TeNderLoin, Omachuck, The Rev, and Ernest Bywater. You guys put the lipstick on my pigs snout of a story! Yes, it's still a pig, but it looks a lot better now.

Reposting

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Ernest Bywater has found the problems I had with italics text not showing up properly. He is fixing Chapters 4 and 5 for reposting, and the rest of the chapters 6-12 which haven't posted yet. Hopefully, this will make the mental conversations a lot easier to follow. Thanks for your patience with a new author.

Retribution Chapter 3

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Chapter 3 has been posted. Chapter 4 will be loaded on Friday evening. The title of Chapter 4 is 'New Skills and an Angel.

Retribution

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I posted Chapter 2 early by accident. Still trying to figure out how all this works. With the help of Ernest Bywater, I did manage to get the rest of Retribution's chapters into the SOL queue. Chapter 3 will post Wednesday, Chapter 4 on Friday etc. The final chapter, 12 will post on September 3rd. For those of you who can't wait and want to read the entire story at once, Ernest Bywater has published it for me on his account at lulu.
http://www.lulu.com/shop/gary-davis/retribution/ebook/product-23293706.html
Is the link. Thanks for reading my story. Enjoy.

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