Thornfoote: Blog

I tried to fix a minor error in Chapter 13 and forgot to change the posting date to tomorrow the 30th of August. The default is immediately, so here it is about 14 hours early.

I just set chapter 12 to post immediately so it should be up soon. This was supposed to be the last chapter of Retribution, so when you finish reading it, consider that the story should be done at this point. I added two bonus chapters instead to fix the banking error. Chapters 13 and 14 of Retribution were originally Chapters 1 and 2 of a possible sequel. Remember to vote for a score for the story please. Contact me by the mail system or through comments at the end of Retribution and let me know first, if you want to see a sequel to Retribution. Second, you will have three optional paths to choose from for Linda's future in sequels. I'm sure readers can come up with a lot more potential paths, but I'm offering the three that make the most sense to me and which allow me something interesting to write about. Cheers and have fun reading about Linda.

I've started posting a chapter a day. I need to get to the end of Retribution before I can continue writing any sequel, and I'm anxious to get started writing again. Chapter 14 reveals the flaw I ran into and requests a decision by the fans of Linda and her bunch of misfit girls. You get to vote whether or not I write a sequel and choose one of 3 options going forward for Linda to pursue. I'll write the sequel if the fans want one, and I'll follow your choice in how the story goes forward. So, one chapter a day until Retribution is completed. Today is Chapter 10, and by Thursday the whole first story will be out there.

I'm posting Chapter 8 now instead of tomorrow as a thank-you for all the supportive emails I've received from fans of Linda.

Well that last blog sure woke up a lot of readers. Everyone wants to know what the flaw is now so I'll tell you it involves international banking. I have a plausible fix to the problem but rather than rewrite chapters 8-12, I've decided to add two additional chapters to the end of the story that Imho correct/explain the error if you, the readers, suspend logic just a tiny bit. Thanks to all of you guys that emailed me.