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There will not be any genies showing up on Game World. I tossed in the comment by Charles just to show that anything was possible given the desires of the networks. I also wrote it because I'd just read a story on SOL about genies and they were on my mind. Unfortunately as I indicated in the rest of the chapter in which I referred to genies, dropping one on Game World would just cause major problems for the networks and that is the last thing they want given the trouble that Charles has already unleashed upon them. Even the weakest genie would unbalance things on the planet. So once and for all, no genies. Thanks for reading.
Thank you everyone for the feedback on Chapter Fifty-Eight. Don't know what happened; just a bad week I guess. Corrections made and chapter reposted.
Thanks again.
Virtually Taboo is a new story that I have posted to SOL as of this morning. It is a one off story that is twenty-five pages long in word. I don't now how many pages it will be once it gets loaded up on SOL. This is the first time I haven't just pasted text.
The story is not like Game World or New Beginnings: Adam's Story. I've indicated 'much sex' although some might just call it a stroke story. There is a twist to it so I hope people give it a chance before rejecting it because of the codes. I wrote this over a decade ago and I spent the summer cleaning it up and getting it edited.
I hope you enjoy it.
Thanks,
Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad to see that people are still reading this tale and enjoying it.
To answer Landen's question, the story covers only the first year that Adam and his extended family are on the new planet. I left off with the first of his children being born. Hopefully I will be able to come back to this story in the future and do a sequel.
To address Don's comments, for the time being they did live happily ever after, especially with the help of AI. Of course that doesn't mean that life will be perfect for them. As I say above, I hope to write a sequel that deals with the trials and tribulations of raising so many children with only one father to set an example for them. It could be interesting.
Thanks for reading and contacting me.
To those who've pointed it out, I did screw up with this chapter and I'm sorry about that. As my previous blog to Mark stated, you guys are right. Charles could have just bought a ship if he really had wanted it so badly. I have updated the Chapter to address his motivation in going after the Sea Nymph. It's probably still weak but it is an improvement and it does give some justification for his actions. That said I think the real thing behind Charles actions was stupidity on my part and on his. I got caught up with falling back on what he has been doing consistently for the last few months and he got caught up with trying to please the consortium so that they will do what he wants them to do.
That said the chapter has been written and I don't think I should change it too much. Charles is going to have to live with his recent actions and I am going to have to review the next couple of chapters to see how I can integrate the issue into them. I think Felicity is going to have to have a word with him.
Thanks for pointing this out to me and I do apologize again for any confusion. I hope you all keep reading.
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