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Fallen Skies Chapter Eight is Posted

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Happy News, Eight is done and it was a royal pain in the Butt to write. Had to start over five times before I got it to go were it needed to go. I am forcing the story to re-sync with the Everquest 2 Time line now. That will be important in Book three, Refuge and Adventure.

Tamalain finally get's the Dragon Scale armor, only to find it is not what it seems.

Chapter Eight Fallen Skies

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I finally managed to push through it. I even avoided the War that kept creeping in to the story. If I post it now in it's current state, the local grammar nazi's would have heart failure. I have to let is simmer a few days, maybe two weeks before I go back and fix the mess. Meanwhile, chapter nine is coming along nicely and I have set ups for events in ten.

Fallen Skies chapter repost

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I have re-posted Chapter six with fixes noted from last week. Chapter seven received a major overhaul. It did not get the going over it needed before posting. Life kept me too busy to give it the beating deserved.


Now to those that chant: get and editor, get an editor. I am a story teller, not an author. I have no plans to ever try to sell my writings. My one stint with an editor was a sad joke. My errors are my own and I do the best I can to fix things as I go. If it bothers you so much that my writing isn't dictionary perfect, don't read it.

Fallen Skies Chapter seven is in.

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Well folks, I need a few weeks to get caught up. Real life and story issues keep getting in the way. So I will not be updating for the next few weeks.

Thanks for reading so far and enjoy.

Headaches of Chapter Eight

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I am on my forth rewrite from scratch now. Just deleted the mess from before. I am just not making headway at this point. I know were it need to go, just getting there without a war between the Dwarves and Elven is driving me nuts. I hope the way I am going will solve the issue.

The main reason I am having a problem, I need to pull the story back in line with the current Everquest2 universe. Things are out of sync badly at the moment.

 

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