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SEND IN THE GNOMES!!!
A tinkered nightmare that could blow up at any second.
Fallen Skies suffered another delay. Figuring out how to move a 5 ton lead block with limited medieval tech, magic blocked, and bad roads is taking a bit of work. Other wise things are progressing nicely, I think.
Please accept my apology's on any errors in this chapter. I have been moved from night shift to days, so my time is limited as I adjust to being awake during the day.
I have been reading and yes I found a few minor errors, but monster of a continuity error towards the end. I will do what I can to fix it.
Happy News, Eight is done and it was a royal pain in the Butt to write. Had to start over five times before I got it to go were it needed to go. I am forcing the story to re-sync with the Everquest 2 Time line now. That will be important in Book three, Refuge and Adventure.
Tamalain finally get's the Dragon Scale armor, only to find it is not what it seems.
I finally managed to push through it. I even avoided the War that kept creeping in to the story. If I post it now in it's current state, the local grammar nazi's would have heart failure. I have to let is simmer a few days, maybe two weeks before I go back and fix the mess. Meanwhile, chapter nine is coming along nicely and I have set ups for events in ten.
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