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reworking chapters one and two

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After a few very nasty emails yesterday, by nasty I mean just plain rude, I am going over them both closely. Chapter One really was a mess. I have done a complete rewrite of it, so Two, and likely three will be getting a full overhaul as well. I hope the reworked portions are more to every bodies liking.
I will let you all know when the re-post to v1.20 goes up.

What did I do wrong.

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Not a single letter or comment on chapter three of Fallen Skies. Did I do so well that you the readers have been left speechless? Or was it so bad you couldn't read it? Does nobody love me?


Quit whining.


Shhh. Seeing if they are even awake.

I see errors in the posted version, hopefully fixed

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I try to read the posted version as soon as it goes up, I can see errors there that I miss in Word. Just Re-posted Chapter three after fixing a few of the more annoying items I saw.

Chapter Three of Fallen Skies is submitted

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Well folks, I thought I had an editor, I don't so all mistakes are truly my own.

This week is action packed, a few questions answered and new ones raised. It also shows why getting a dragon of any sort pissed off at you is a bad idea all around.

Fallen Skies, Chapter Two is now loaded and waiting

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Here is news that will make some of the Grammar Nazi's happy, I have accepted the services of Sam Houston as editor. Hopefully he is still willing.

 

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