Tamalain: Blog

Just to give a heads up, rewrite and edit completed. It is interesting in that after several months, it was like reading the story for the first time. I was able to spot errors all over and fix them and tighten the story up a bit.

I combined the chapters as well. Instead of 15, it is only 5 now. The prolog went in the dumpster, it was beyond helping.

The really interesting thing for me was seeing the evolution of my style as I progressed further along.

First Chapter will go up Friday morning, so until then, have a good week.

I have asked that it be pulled . It is done.

I am nearly done with the reworking of the story. I combined chapters so it is only five now instead of 15. The main things I have done are to tighten up the dialog and fix errors I am coming across. I have also reworded large sections of the earliest chapters as that is were the worst of the story was. Hopefully I will start posting next Friday if I have enough time to finish up.

I am at work and she just saunters into the forefront of my thoughts and starts in on how we are going to go about the rewrite, that she has it all worked out. Yeah, right.

I have a lot of time on my hands at the moment, so an idea started rumbling about in my head. I have been playing Clash of Clans, so that is the topic. It is starting out over the top and just getting stranger.

My wife is doing well in her recovery, and my insurance is being friendly, so I am happy again.

Due to changes in my work times and family health issues, I have not been able to work on any of Tamalain's time on the island. What I did get done is crap, so it is going to the bit bin. I will try to resume once my wife is over her surgery and well into recovery. I do thank all of you that read what I have posted so far.