Tamalain: Blog

I am stepping away from the Arrowmark series to write in other areas. To be honest folks, I have stopped playing Everquest II entirely. I got tired of it as you have to be in a high level guild to advance anymore, and I just don't have the time. I have started a new story that is totally new and not game based. It does borrow lightly from the Steampunk theme, but it it doesn't overwhelm one in victorian gears dress and style. I have only just started, so I am fleshing out the world and cast. The ending is still lost in the mist, so i need to find that before I get to far.

Thank you for reading what I have posted so far and good hunting.

Even hearing read back to me as I read along, I still miss things.

This is the end of the primary Tamalain of Norrath Story arc. I have a few loose ends to tie up, but they will happen as I find time and mood to write.

William scrambled to his feet while Tamalain spun about to see what was telling them to wait. She saw a single Orc Pawn in the entry way from the main building. Behind it were several of the larger Grunts, holding spears, pushing the Pawn forwards. "Wait." It called again. "Give loot, you go. Big fight over who lead now, you take, you go." The small Orc waddled over and dropped he bag at their feet and scampered away as fast as he could.

I did a full re-edit on the first three chapters and I think got most of the problems fixed. I suspect an English teacher would still chew me up, but hey, it has been a couple of decades since school.