Tamalain: Blog

William scrambled to his feet while Tamalain spun about to see what was telling them to wait. She saw a single Orc Pawn in the entry way from the main building. Behind it were several of the larger Grunts, holding spears, pushing the Pawn forwards. "Wait." It called again. "Give loot, you go. Big fight over who lead now, you take, you go." The small Orc waddled over and dropped he bag at their feet and scampered away as fast as he could.

I did a full re-edit on the first three chapters and I think got most of the problems fixed. I suspect an English teacher would still chew me up, but hey, it has been a couple of decades since school.

William had just refilled his water bags when he heard the sounds of another patrol entering the area he and Tamalain had settled in while she got her head back together. He quickly returned to cover her and himself in his cloak, but was surprised to find her standing, and looking in the direction of the wandering patrol. She saw him and smiled, then vanished from sight. He heard a faint rustling of cloth and then screams as the Orcs met something deadlier than themselves.

Enjoy.

More traveling, old friends, new adventures.

Well, it took me long enough. Chapter one is on the way and Chapter Two only needs one more major going over. Chapter Three is rough completed and needs fine tuning. Four in started, but not far along yet. I can't guarantee weekly posting right now, but I will try to keep the delays short. Enjoy.

Oh yes, please let me know what you think. I grumble, but I don't bite, much.