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I went over the Interlude and Chapter 1. I think I got most all the errors fixed this time. I also worked over some of the conversations and details. Enjoy.
A full re-post. Has many corrections and improvements. It now has the correct number of siblings and kills corrected. So many things. I thank everybody that has pointed out the errors and in several cases showed me a proper correction. Those hints have helped in the latest work as well, so again, Thank you.
I do try, I really do. All noted errors are added in and will be fully updated when I do a full re-posting.
Andrew is done for now, but fear not, he will be back. Now for Brena and her adventures getting to Tarin's Crossing.
Merry Christmas folks.
This week will be the last chapter for a Farmer I am Not.
But Fear not dear readers. I will be posting Chapter one of "Queen of Thieves." Book 2 of New Journeyers. See you all Friday.
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