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This one does hate passive voice. It can bite me on that. As to other more direct errors, I see them now and hopefully catch them even as I make them. I will try to do better as I go. Poor Ledger in Book 3 is trying to survive the first week on the road without killing himself by his own enchantment.
I had always suspected that there were more grammar tools in this Word 2007 I use. Only the spell checker was turned on. Now I have the grammar checks turned on and oh my am I an Awful writer according to it. Now I have to go through every chapter, AGAIN.
I went over the Interlude and Chapter 1. I think I got most all the errors fixed this time. I also worked over some of the conversations and details. Enjoy.
A full re-post. Has many corrections and improvements. It now has the correct number of siblings and kills corrected. So many things. I thank everybody that has pointed out the errors and in several cases showed me a proper correction. Those hints have helped in the latest work as well, so again, Thank you.
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