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I have added an end note, so as to warn folks about dark themes in the new story, "On My Seventeenth Wedding Anniversary". This is a result of several thoughtful comments from folks who did not particularly like the story for one reason or another. Thank you all, for taking the time to compose your explanations. I appreciate the help. Let's see if your counsel helps me!/Reltney
I've gotten a lot of feedback regarding this one, and many, many downloads. Thank you.
Speaking, for moment, to those who scored this story as a "1", a "2", or a "3" particularly, if you would present some detail regarding your ratings, I'm interested in what made this so repellant to you. Did I squick you, and if so, help me understand how I miscoded it. Are you seeking humpa-humpa in every paragraph, and if so, does plot or character development factor into your enjoyment of the story in any way?
I'm simply curious. It might even help me write better!
Chapter 2 has been submitted. Considerably more flesh than exposition. I hope you all enjoy it. I kinda let my darker side out for a stroll, with this one. Remember! No memories were harmed in the writing of this story! That is, of course, in stark contrast to what might happen to thee or me should someone foolish attempt to actually live out this fantasy.
I've just posted a new story, On My Seventeenth Wedding Anniversary. The first chapter has no sex, but sets up the following chapters. It has been a long time coming (I started writing it before Mr. Obama was inaugurated!), and it helped me to work out my harsh feelings toward The Ex. If you folks enjoy it as well, then, bonus! Feedback is welcome./Reltney
I've posted chapter five. This story (this part of the story?) is done. Please send me feedback, discussing what attracted you to the story, what you found unappealing, and how I could improve.
This is entirely a fantasy. I have other fantasies, you know....
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