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To say I'm disappointed in the reaction to Dude, Never Again is an understatement. I was uncomfortable writing it, I never was happy with the story and I had no idea how to fix it. I don't know why I had such trouble writing about a wimp. I have known plenty some are quite likable. Some are terrible and hard to like.
This wasn't my story it was told to me by a friend and I wrote it from a situation he proposed. It isn't a true story it was one of those what if this happens? That doesn't excuse how bad it must be to have the terrible low score. I don't expect to have high scores but to have one this low is a very humbling experience.
The logical thing to do is to abandon the Cuckold type of story. I guess I am not a rational person - I have started another cuckold story and plan to finish it soon. Hopefully, I will finish today. I don't know if I have righted the ship or not. Let me know what you think when I get it posted - better or worse?
AJ caught a mistake and pointed it out. I have fixed it and re-upped the story In a Drunken Rage Way to go AJ
Okay here is a story I wrote for a friend - not one of the Millie Zone stories but just for a friend. I refined it from what I wrote originally and present it here for you to see. It is about Gay rape so it won't be up everyone's alley (no pun intended.)
I call it In A Drunken Rage I wrote from what my friend said happened. He was a male prostitute I knew when I worked the streets. According to him he lost his ass virginity. Again, this is according to him.
http://storiesonline.net/s/12148/in-a-drunken-rage-sex-story A Drunken Rage Warning Read at your own risk!
My newest story is called The Right Nigger Bitch. I hope it is better received than the last one I put up (Dude, Never Again) evidently I don't do cuckold very well or at least not yet.
Here is a story of Rape and Murder it involves a young black prostitute and rapist that forces his way into her home and her body. Offered for your perusal The Right Nigger Bitch. http://storiesonline.net/s/12141/the-right-nigger-bitch
"What the hell? He disgust me, he is such a pussy," she told him. "Not a man like you." That is how a man learns his wife is fucking his best friend and now he is doing it right in front of him. One man's horror is another man's pleasure, in my new story "Dude, Never Again" http://storiesonline.net/s/12134/dude-never-again
Which are you - the small cocked wimp or the stud that fucks his wife right in front of him?
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