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Recently I received an email from an individual that read one of my stories. He liked, in general, the story but hated the violence in the story. He explored some of my other stories and found that violence is a common theme in my stories. His suggestion to me was to turn off the option for voting, so I don't get discouraged by the low scores and explained to me that certain people read the stories despite the warnings and codes indicating that there is violence, death, and murder and vote it low because of that fact.
I have received this suggestion on several occasions; I should turn off the score option. Usually, from a fan worried I will change my style, moderate the violence, or stop writing altogether. I'm not going to do turn off the score option - everyone can express their opinion that way. If they really like it or really hate the story, they are welcome and encouraged to email me. Would like higher scores? Sure, but I'm not cutting out the violence - the stories are reflections of what I have seen, they are a way for me to get my demons out in a non-destructive way, therapy for my soul.
I know I'm not a great writer, I'm not even a very good writer. I will try to become a better writer, but the subject matter stays for it is what it is. I will attempt to tell a story when I write. I will strive to have a beginning a middle and an end. The stories I write should have more than just sex or just violence, perhaps sometimes they don't.
I love y'all and appreciate all of your ever so kind, and not so kind, comments. Keep them coming!
Millie
This is the second story in my new series Gabriella Death Angel Accepting a contract to eliminate Lone shark and gambling numbers man for the Sicilian Mob, Chandler. Gabby plots his capture, torture, and eventually death. She learns a terrible secret of his that makes her hate him even more. Only complications set in and Gabriella wonders if she has chosen the right profession. Has Gabby started something she can't finish? Join here and find out for yourself, as Gabriella Death Angel takes her first assignation assignment.
I have decided to make a series out of my newest female umm heroine, heroine? Antiheroine maybe that is closer to the point.
Gabriella O'Neil the Death Angle, is the muscled up enforcer of the O'Neil crime syndicate. Follow her from her first steps into the family business. Both a man-hater and a man-eater she loves fucking women almost as much as fucking up and raping men. The powerful woman is not famine, dainty, nor dignified she's a rough and tumble bitch who takes what she wants and hands out pain to anyone that crosses her.
Not all rapist are men, not all victims are women! Meet Gabby, she is a muscle bound woman wo takes what she wants, from whomever she wishes. Seeing man she at once despises she abuses him and then moves on to take a young woman to be her own. She prowls the bars looking for victims the bathrooms are a good place to nail someone don't you think?
http://storiesonline.net/s/13392/gabriella-powder-room-debauchery
An abusive husband is paid back in a violent assault for the wrongs he has done. A black man shows the bigoted wife beater that he is no more than a faggot sissy only at his best when ass is stuffed with cock.
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