Millie 90 lbs of Dynamite: Blog

A new request came in for a Millie's Vast Expanse story. So this is for Brian.

You have entered Millie's Vast Expanse, a wondrous empire of the twisted and bizarre. Where things can be turned upside or sideways. Can you feel that little tickle in your soul, that deep-seated fear of embracement? There she is the little girl that makes your life a living hell. She walking up to you, oh God no, she has the mischievous smile on her face. There's a sadistic twinkle in her eyes as she drags you into Millie's Vast Expanse and it will be 8th and 9th grade all over again.

At the instance of my friend Nyssa I made a few changes and clarifications to the story. The beginning and end are clearer now - well that is the goal anyway.

Millie

This maybe the most extreme story I have written. I make no apology for that just have been in a bad mood all day and took out on the bitch in this story. This is an extremely violent tale fill with lots of nasty punishments heaped on a cheating wife. It has some of the most extreme stuff I have written about. Only for those that are brave, it is not a story for the faint of heart! You have been warned!

It is located here http://storiesonline.net/s/12606/the-adjustment-service

Two other recent stories are It's a Sin to Kill a Tomboy http://storiesonline.net/s/12571/its-a-sin-to-kill-a-tomboy and The Preacher and his Wife http://storiesonline.net/s/12560/the-preacher-and-his-wife

Enjoy, hate, whatever!

Love Millie

There are actually three mistakes in this story. Two were intentional to see if anyone would react and tell me about them. The third was an accident caused by my original version being set when the girl was older. One person caught one of the mistakes and notified me. No one else has caught any of them. If you know anything about baseball, you should know one of my intentional errors.

Kudos to the reader who caught the one plot-hole!

To say that "The Remembrance of the Reluctant Representative" story is outside the box of my normal story is a gross understatement. I have never written a soft romance based story before. I only hoping the person I wrote this for will enjoy it. After all it was written for her. Surprisingly, I actually liked this story and even enjoyed writing it. That is not to say I intend to write a lot of this type of story; however if anyone ask me to write something that isn't as dark, hard edged, or violent again I think I can do it some measure of justice. Not that I anticipate voting to be any kinder to me on this than in the past. I don't write for those that vote (though bad scores do hurt). I write for me and for those that like my stories. I hear from them and appreciate their kind words of encouragement. I publish at other sites with voting and my scores are much higher at those sites. Why you ask? I have no idea.