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Because you have asked me to write about this - This story is based on events of someone I know. There may be some stretching of the truth and there is a time compression issue on the account as well. Some have asked me specific questions that this addresses. It is about two women that find each other and find they need each other. There isn't much sex in this story, a little violence, but then there is a little violence in life. Meet Samantha and Tilly one a stripper and the other a plain old dirty whore. There are few codes for this story - it is Lesbian Action what else would you need know?
A new request came in for a Millie's Vast Expanse story. So this is for Brian.
You have entered Millie's Vast Expanse, a wondrous empire of the twisted and bizarre. Where things can be turned upside or sideways. Can you feel that little tickle in your soul, that deep-seated fear of embracement? There she is the little girl that makes your life a living hell. She walking up to you, oh God no, she has the mischievous smile on her face. There's a sadistic twinkle in her eyes as she drags you into Millie's Vast Expanse and it will be 8th and 9th grade all over again.
At the instance of my friend Nyssa I made a few changes and clarifications to the story. The beginning and end are clearer now - well that is the goal anyway.
Millie
This maybe the most extreme story I have written. I make no apology for that just have been in a bad mood all day and took out on the bitch in this story. This is an extremely violent tale fill with lots of nasty punishments heaped on a cheating wife. It has some of the most extreme stuff I have written about. Only for those that are brave, it is not a story for the faint of heart! You have been warned!
It is located here http://storiesonline.net/s/12606/the-adjustment-service
Two other recent stories are It's a Sin to Kill a Tomboy http://storiesonline.net/s/12571/its-a-sin-to-kill-a-tomboy and The Preacher and his Wife http://storiesonline.net/s/12560/the-preacher-and-his-wife
Enjoy, hate, whatever!
Love Millie
There are actually three mistakes in this story. Two were intentional to see if anyone would react and tell me about them. The third was an accident caused by my original version being set when the girl was older. One person caught one of the mistakes and notified me. No one else has caught any of them. If you know anything about baseball, you should know one of my intentional errors.
Kudos to the reader who caught the one plot-hole!
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