Millie 90 lbs of Dynamite: Blog

At the instance of my friend Nyssa I made a few changes and clarifications to the story. The beginning and end are clearer now - well that is the goal anyway.

Millie

This maybe the most extreme story I have written. I make no apology for that just have been in a bad mood all day and took out on the bitch in this story. This is an extremely violent tale fill with lots of nasty punishments heaped on a cheating wife. It has some of the most extreme stuff I have written about. Only for those that are brave, it is not a story for the faint of heart! You have been warned!

It is located here http://storiesonline.net/s/12606/the-adjustment-service

Two other recent stories are It's a Sin to Kill a Tomboy http://storiesonline.net/s/12571/its-a-sin-to-kill-a-tomboy and The Preacher and his Wife http://storiesonline.net/s/12560/the-preacher-and-his-wife

Enjoy, hate, whatever!

Love Millie

There are actually three mistakes in this story. Two were intentional to see if anyone would react and tell me about them. The third was an accident caused by my original version being set when the girl was older. One person caught one of the mistakes and notified me. No one else has caught any of them. If you know anything about baseball, you should know one of my intentional errors.

Kudos to the reader who caught the one plot-hole!

To say that "The Remembrance of the Reluctant Representative" story is outside the box of my normal story is a gross understatement. I have never written a soft romance based story before. I only hoping the person I wrote this for will enjoy it. After all it was written for her. Surprisingly, I actually liked this story and even enjoyed writing it. That is not to say I intend to write a lot of this type of story; however if anyone ask me to write something that isn't as dark, hard edged, or violent again I think I can do it some measure of justice. Not that I anticipate voting to be any kinder to me on this than in the past. I don't write for those that vote (though bad scores do hurt). I write for me and for those that like my stories. I hear from them and appreciate their kind words of encouragement. I publish at other sites with voting and my scores are much higher at those sites. Why you ask? I have no idea.

My new story for Millie's Vast Expanse should be up soon. It is in the cue now!

He's an aggressive man who got where he was going with cunning and stealth. He has hunted and trapped his prey in such a shrewd way they become willing participants in their own abuse. He enjoys his female employees as playthings. Taking from them what he wants and giving them what he wishes them to have. Afterward, he abandons them to their ordinary, mundane mind-numbing existence. It's the 1980's in America, greed is good, but power is better. We are cruising at 30,000 feet and about to begin our descent into Millie's Vast Expanse, buckle up it's going to be a tumultuous journey.

Let me know what you think!