Grey Dragon: Blog

I have Post-traumatic stress disorder, and the events of the last few weeks have greatly disturbed me.

I am working to get through it.

GD

On 2020-05-16 cadsat said:
Please, please keep the original (awe fuck me) story up while you write the new version. I hate when authors delete all chapters of an original story while writing the new version. I like to compare both versions as the story progresses. Thank you for providing readers with an awesome story to enjoy.

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First thanks for reading 'cadsat' as well as all my faithful readers.

Second, No, worries I will not be deleting any of the 'Ah fuck me' chapters. They will serve to remind me of how far I have come as a writer. It seems slower than a snail's crawl. And the mistakes one can make.

I enjoy writing, but in this case it gets in the way completing more chapters. And chapter 17 of AFM is a prime example.

Some people liked it others didn't. But the most important issue was that it was more or less a rewrite of chapter 14 that I had forgotten I had said the same things.

The perils of not re-reading and taking way too long between writing chapters.

Anyways, I will keep on writing as best I can. No promises as to when the next will come. I have a few ideas, and knowing myself they will slow up other aspects of the story.

GOD, willing (chuckles as that will be the name of one of the chapters.) Maybe it will not be so long.

I have to discipline myself from not rambling so much as that I kill the flow of the story.

Thanks again for being readers.
Grey Dragon AKA Allan, to my friends.

The rest of you can call me whatever you like, as long as it is not late for dinner.

WOW, simply wow, only a few hours after posting and already over 1400 downloads. I am truly humbled by it.

I will try not to let you down.
GD

Greetings,

I am doing a rewrite of 'Ah fuck me,' and calling it 'The Compound.'

I am hoping to self-publish someday and have been told 'Ah, Fuck me' does not look good on a book cover.

This is not merely a name change or rewrite, I am hopeful that I am cleaning up the many grammatical/spelling errors in my original writing.

I had an idea from living in the Philippines, seeing the markers next to the road, of the Bataan Death March.

As a veteran, I knew I couldn't change what had happened. But I thought to write a story that might.

Then the story took on a life of its own. I was surprised when I saw the first comments on my story, then learned of the stats, that was when I knew nothing.

I type with just two fingers, not because that is all I have, though that might make for an excellent excuse. I just never learned to touch type.

I hope you will appreciate the changes and let me know of the inevitable errors. Copy and paste the offending sentence with the correction after it.

Thanks

Grey Dragon

It looks like I will be redoing chapter 14 and those following, 16 and 17 looked like they were just rewrites of 14

Crap serves me right for taking so long between chapters.

There is some good stuff in 14 and 16, so I will be combining them, making one more significant chapter. I will have to renumber the other sections.

This rewrite looks like I will be doing some major work here, and renaming the story and then reposting it with its new name.

Please bear with me.

GD