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This would be a reposting of chapter 13 from a day ago, due to a few mistakes such as not removing comments.
I know it has been a long time coming. I hope the wait was worth if my readers.
Please let me know one way or the other.
GD
I am making progress. I have done chapters 8 and 9, and have started on 10, then will do 11 before reposting, something I should have done in the first place.
Those of you have read my past chapters know there will be a lot of typos and other Grammatical errors, for those that wish to provide some pre-posting editing. I want to be up front, I don't want to be disappointed with people saying they will help then not, just asking for a first read before anyone else.
I don't see much point in that if they don't help then everyone will have the same messed up post to read.
I can only offer recognition as editors, of course any you do not find will be mine to own.
I have done my best, I read and reread them, checked with spell checker, and had the narrator read them back to me. None of that seems to have helped as some of you still find way too many errors.
When you do, please, cut and paste the offending passage then make any corrections in red font. The tiny font my Email gives me hurts my eyes.
As always enjoy and thanks for reading
GD
ps. I need help.
I just been reading my revision of chapter 6 and I must say I found a lot I was unhappy with. Typo's not with standing, it just didn't look as good as when I gave it my last reading.
Seeing it posted, it seemed that the errors just screamed out at me. So I am asking for help.
For would be editors,
I thank you for your interest. The following is for you.
About those grammatical issues, if you could cut and paste them here or better still copy the chapter into `Windows Word', and add comments where you find them, and make suggestions as to how to fix them, it would be a great help, and such help will be acknowledged as being a contributing editor.
Those that know how to use word and how to add comments are most welcomed to do so.
All the chapters would most likely benefit from your keen eyes. And when you make a comment please include a reason you see the need for one as I will sometimes not see your reasoning, if you simply change the wording, without explanation.
When I look at my own work and see just what I mess I made of it, well it can be depressing, and if I am depressed I don't feel like writing.
So if you like the story and like to read more, and have a good eye for seeing mistakes, and can comment on fixes, I welcome your help and input.
As always enjoy and thanks for reading,
GD
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I just been reading my revision of chapter 6 and I must say I found a lot I was unhappy with. Typo's not with standing, it just didn't look as good as when I gave it my last reading.
Seeing it posted, it seemed that the errors just screamed out at me. So I am asking for help.
For would be editors,
I thank you for your interest. The following is for you.
About those grammatical issues, if you could cut and paste them here or better still copy the chapter into 'Windows Word', and add comments where you find them, and make suggestions as to how to fix them, it would be a great help, and such help will be acknowledged as being a contributing editor.
Those that know how to use word and how to add comments are most welcomed to do so.
All the chapters would most likely benefit from your keen eyes. And when you make a comment please include a reason you see the need for one as I will sometimes not see your reasoning, if you simply change the wording, without explanation.
When I look at my own work and see just what I mess I made of it, well it can be depressing, and if I am depressed I don't feel like writing.
So if you like the story and like to read more, and have a good eye for seeing mistakes, and can comment on fixes, I welcome your help and input.
As always enjoy and thanks for reading,
GD
Has been rewritten and submitted for posting. I did a great deal of work on it, and feel rereading would be well worth your time.
Chapter seven is now under-review and with any luck be done in a week.
For would be editors,
I thank you for your interest. The following it for you.
About those grammatical issues, if you could cut and paste them here of better yet copy the chapter into windows word, and add comments where you find them and suggestions as to how to fix them it would be a great help, such help will be acknowledged as being a contributing editor.
As always enjoy and thanks for reading,
GD
I have posted a quick tease, of what is to come, it is by no means a full chapter, just a means to remove the inactive note that was attached to the story's description.
Please feel free to comment. I expect there will be some questions.
As always enjoy and thanks for reading,
GD
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