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I'm so impressed with this story... I never thought I'd even get this far truth be told. Steven and NN have been rocks throughout and without their help it wouldn't even be half of what it is! I know the biggest issue I had with it, is no outline. So book two I promise will have one, a beginning, middle and end. I am so pleased with the result.
Chapter one has surpassed 20 thousand hits oO at 21525 hits, making the story over 30 thousand hits in total.
I'm in negotiation phase with someone to write James' Military career out while I work on his college stage.
How does everyone feel if book two has sex? It feels more approriate to the setting as that's what one does in college! Obviously, I will try and make sure it doesn't overshadow the plot of course.
Link to Second to None
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3619410/1/Second-To-None
"Do you like the abuse?"
"Ma'am we're Colonial Marines, we live for the abuse!"
"Oorah."
Fuck me that was a good episode, THAT's how you do star wars!!! Boba Fett RULES
Three Lady writers (as far as I know...)
Very good authors worth checking out, they vary in styles, but worth reading through.
Enjoy!
Chapter eight posted, big thank you to Steven and then to NN for cleaning up my mess. Anything else is my mistake.
To all of you out there suffering with trolls, its the same thing I say about scalpers, fuck em, let them all burn in hell.
As long as you aren't a bunch of fucking Prima Donna's. Listen, there is criticism, in order to be a good writer you have to take it on the chin. As long as you learn, if someone slags your shit off for no reason, tell em to shove it up their ass. But if someone offers you reasonable criticism, listen and learn. Trust me, through out writing Tempus, I've learned a great deal, one of the things being writing an outline! (Something our dear freind GRRM could learn as well!)
Steven nags me like mother, so we all have to suffer at some point.
And remember folks, yer only stupid when you stop learning.
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