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January 27, 2014
Posted at 8:03 pm

Melissa's Secrets - Chapter 52 In The Queue

"Chapter 52 - Getting There Is Half the Fun" is in the queue and should be posted very shortly. This begins an important turn in the story to the discovery of the big secret shared by Andrea and Colleen. Other secrets will also be resolved, as well as uncovered, over the remaing chapters.

I've also reposted (in the queue as well) "Chapter 51 - A Night Of Firsts" with a significant change to the final few scenes. After receiving comments and thinking through how the scene was orignally written, I decided to alter it. Both Peter and Melissa came across as being "out of character". Mel pushed Peter into something he was saying no to. Even Andrea and Greg allowed it to occur in the original version, which was very out of character for them. Thus the change. Otherwise, chapter 51 is still the same (except for a few typo fixes).

Have fun!