John and His Small Bat
by Mr_Misanthrope
Copyright© 2025 by Mr_Misanthrope
True Story Story: Humans in general annoy me, but there is a range of people who really irritate me. This is the first of maybe more short stories detailing the types of behaviour (taken to the extreme) that makes humans suck. It was cathartic to write, so I don’t care if anybody likes it or not. This one is about people who can't take criticism and needs constant validation.
Tags: Vignettes Humiliation AI Generated
It was a perfect Saturday afternoon, the kind that felt made for hanging out in the park. The sun had already begun its descent, casting long shadows on the grass, and the air was filled with the laughter and shouts of kids playing. A great time for a casual game of baseball for the neighbourhood boy.
John, crouching at shortstop, punched his glove and waited for the next pitch. He loved the game — the thrill of the catch, the sense of being part of something bigger than himself. But today, John felt ... off, his confidence was a little shaky. Maybe it was because he’d been feeling down lately, or maybe it was just because he hadn’t been playing well recently. Either way, he couldn’t shake the feeling that everyone was watching and waiting for him to mess up.
Then came the moment.
The batter — Mike — hit a soft pop-up high into the air. John tracked it, eyes locked on the ball as it spun in the sky. He positioned himself beneath it, ready to make the catch. For a moment, everything seemed perfect. But as he reached out with his glove, his concentration slipped and the ball hit the end of his finger and bounced away, tumbling to the grass with a light thud, followed by a disappointed groan from his teammates. A missed catch. John froze for a second, his heart sinking. He quickly scooped up the ball, embarrassed, his face burning.
“Hey, Butterfinger,” Mike called with a grin. “You gotta keep your eye on the ball. That one was an easy catch!”
The comment was small, almost too casual to even notice, but to John, it was like a slap in the face. His stomach churned as he felt the words gnaw at his fragile pride. The others laughed — not in a mean way, but in that easygoing, “we’re all friends” kind of way. But for John, it was too much. The laughter felt like a chorus of criticism, the joke felt like an attack. Every doubt he’d been harbouring about his abilities rushed forward like a flood, swamping any rational thought.
He clenched his fists, his chest tight with anger and shame. How dare Mike say something like that? It wouldn’t have been a big deal to anybody else, but John’s mind spiralled; he couldn’t let it go. “Shut up!” John snapped, his voice sharp and laced with venom. The laughter stopped instantly. His friends looked at him, confused.
“What’s wrong, John?” Ben asked cautiously.
“I said, shut up!” John repeated, his voice rising. “You’re always trying to make me look bad! It was just one catch. But nooo, you had to attack me for it!”
The others blinked, stunned. No one had expected this outburst. Mike opened his mouth to say something, but John was already grabbing his bat, the one everybody had been using for the game, and tossed it into his bag. “I don’t need this!” he shouted. “If you can’t let me play without attacking me, then forget it. I’m out.”
He stormed off, his friends watching in silence as he marched toward the gate, clutching the bag tightly. The whole world felt like it was closing in on him, the heat of embarrassment burning his face.
“John, come on!” Luke called after him. “It was just a joke, man! We’re all just messing around.”
But John didn’t stop. He didn’t even look back.
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