Two young men, barely of legal age, go to a bar and pick up two older, very slutty women.

Originally published in French in May 2024 I translated it to republish it in English, which has a much larger readership. Hope you like and comment.

This evening, with a friend, Marco, we went to the Bistro, a neighborhood bar, a bit of a seedy place. We are only 18 years old but we have been allowed in since we were 16. It used to be a tavern where only men were admitted. Times have changed and this has not been the case for years.

The clientele is made up of regulars, mainly old alcoholics. It is rare that unknown customers are present. Some play cards, others exchange and tell stories and especially neighborhood gossip. Sometimes there are women, but really not often. These women, always the same, alcoholics, of a certain age, with a reputation for being easy and slutty.

I grew up in this neighborhood and I know just about everyone. When I was younger, I was a newspaper delivery boy, I also made deliveries for Orion Grocery, the biggest one, I delivered bags of groceries using an old black bicycle with a huge basket attached to the handlebars. The customers were all elderly and some gave me ridiculous tips, but given the obvious poverty I saw in their modest dwellings, I still found them generous to give me only a few cents.

The bar is located very close to my apartment and we go there sometimes, even though our presence stands out from the rest of the clientele. Tonight there were enough people to fill all the tables, many standing in front of the bar. Madame Maurais, Carmen, was there with another woman I didn’t know. She lived nearby like me, on the same street. Carmen is in her fifties, she has a reputation for being a real slut, vulgar. I was told that one evening, a little drunk, she sucked off all the customers still there at closing time.

My friend Marco and I ordered another pitcher of red beer. Carmen came to greet us, but also, and above all, to hope that we would refill her practically empty glass.

“So kids, it’s been a while since I saw you!”

“Come on, sit down, Carmen, I’ll fill your glass.”

“Ha, that’s kind of you.”

She stroked my thigh as I poured the beer into her glass.

“Hi! Carmen, are you hot tonight?”

“Not that I’m still hot tonight, besides, I wonder what those buds in your pants look like.”

Marco, amused, looked at me waiting for my answer.

“I heard you sucked off a lot of guys here the other day.”

She laughed, then recounted the event. He was drunk, two guys accompanied him to the bathroom and took out their cocks. She sucked them both off, then other men came, but she said most of them didn’t get hard at all. In the end, it was only two of them who got an impromptu ball draining.

I asked him who the woman was who was accompanying him.

“She’s my neighbor on the same floor, she was curious about this place.”

“She’s not bad to look at.”

“Would you like me to introduce you to her? She’d be just as happy to be paid for a drink!”

“Okay. Go get her.”

She stood up and walked towards the bar where the woman was. I asked Marco, do you want to take them? “We’ll go to my house, we’ll stop and buy beer.”

“Yeah, and the other one isn’t bad at all, she’s younger.”

Carmen arrived and introduced us to Roma.

“Good evening Roma, do you want to join us? Meet Marco.”

“Yes of course!”

They sat down at the table and we continued with another pot, then another. I could already smell them both a little drunk. Carmen stroked my thigh several times, sometimes going as far as my crotch, watching my reaction with an amused, almost perverse look. Marco was getting to know Roma.

“Hey girls, do you want to go to my place and continue this evening?”

We walked out towards my house, stopping to buy some beers. As soon as we arrived, Marco and I sat down on the couch and these two sluts started sucking us off straight away.

Joe Moose

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