Preface:

This story was a challenge to tell an erotic tale with the fewest words possible. I had it down to 618, but the minimum length for some of the sites I post my works to is 750 words. I had to add some dialogue, a few adjectives, and expand some of the action. This allowed me to post it on all sites. The total word count stands at word count is 752.

As I got on the train, my eyes met hers. There was an instant connection, and I knew that we would soon get naked and sweaty together. I could tell by the way her breathing changed that she knew it too.

A couple of hours later, I entered the dining car and saw her sitting alone. I strutted up to her table and sat down without asking. She looked at me with a wry smile on her face, and an invitation in her eyes.

“I’m Tom,” I said.

“Sue,” she replied, with a wink.

We both knew what was going to happen. After finishing our meal, I led her to the sleeper car and found my berth. I opened the door and let her enter. She stepped through without hesitation. I followed, closing the door behind me.

Once we were alone, my arms wrapped around her waist. I kissed her neck, and she tilted her head exposing more of it. My hands rested on her flat stomach, below her warm soft breasts. I could feel the weight of them pressing on my arms. I cupped one of her globes as my other hand grasped her skirt and dragged it up her legs, exposing her taut thighs.

She twisted her body around, pressing herself against me as our lips met. Her breasts pressed into me as my hands grasped her ass, lifting her. Her long legs encircled my waist as I navigated us to the bed. We landed on the thin mattress, our tongues intertwined.

She pulled her head back, showing me the hunger in her eyes. She began to unbutton my shirt, and I leaned back to give her room to undress me. She kissed my chest as I unzipped her dress, my hands exploring the exposed flesh. My clothes mixed with hers in a pile on the floor.

Between her lipstick and the occasional nip, our lips left trails of little red marks, a map of where they’d been. She dropped to her knees, her eyes looking deep into mine. She grabbed the base of my cock and lowered her mouth over it. I groaned as she deep throated my shaft. Her mouth was better than any pussy I’d ever fucked. I lay back and closed my eyes, savoring her skill.

She sucked, and licked, and slurped until I was harder than I had ever been. I was almost disappointed when she released my cock, until she turned, showing me her sweet ass. Reaching back, she guided my shaft into her warm, velvety-smooth pussy.

She rode me hard, like a Pony Express rider fleeing bandits. Our bodies slapped together. I grasped her hips to try and slow her pace; I wasn’t ready for this to end. She slowed her pace a little. I began to recite the 11 General Orders of a Sentry to try and postpone the inevitable. She pulled away from my rigid shaft and got on all fours.

“I want your cum in my ass,” she said as she wiggled it at me. Still drenched from her fluids, I knelt behind her and spread open those lovely, round orbs. I looked at her cute little puckered hole; it looked so tight, I worried I would hurt her. I worked up a large wad of spit and made sure to coat her with it inside and out. Then I eased my cock in. She pushed back, taking my entire shaft into her bowels without hesitation.

“Now, fuck me like a man,” she demanded.

Never one to deny a lady’s request, I grabbed her hips, pulled her back, and then drove my cock deep inside her.

She screamed, “OH YES! Pound my ass!”

We moaned and groaned as my cock pistoned in and out of her bunghole. I let one of my hands slip around her waist, finding her wet pussy. I rubbed her clit, trying to make her cum; knowing, I couldn’t last much longer.

Our bodies slapped together in animal lust, both of us reaching the pinnacle of pleasure. As my cum blasted deep into her, her arms collapsed. Her face pressed to the floor, she cried out and shuddered as her climax washed over her. When we recovered, I took her in my arms and kissed the back of her neck.

“Baby, you’re the greatest,” I told her.

“You’re not so bad yourself,” she replied.

She kissed me on the cheek and got dressed and flashed me one last smile before walking out of my life forever.