One of the Best Stories Eddie Will Probably Ever Read
Copyright© 2026 by Mike McGifford (I have permission to post it)
Chapter 9
Coming of Age Sex Story: Chapter 9 - I didn't write this. Mike McGifford did. I put it in the coming-of-age category, but it's also so much more. BDSM and incest, embarrassed nude females, and all the perverted shit that I enjoy rolled up into one delicious dish. Mike can take the subtle and mundane life of a family that happens to have a kinky side business and let you experience life with them through word pictures. It's not the best story I ever wrote. It's one of the best I have ever read.
Caution: This Coming of Age Sex Story contains strong sexual content, including Ma/Fa mt/ft Ma/ft Teenagers Consensual Incest BDSM DomSub MaleDom Humiliation Facial Oral Sex Sex Toys Illustrated
“I mean,” my sister snapped out of her decision when my father mentioned being my pet for life. I could literally see the resolve draining from her face. “Not for life.”
“Exactly what I thought. You are high on endorphins, and fantasy. Neither of you know what it’s like to truly commit to anything. You’ve never had a boyfriend for longer than a weekend, and suddenly you want to obey your brother?”
“True, but I still want to explore submission. Is that cool, Daddy? You can boss me around too.”
“I don’t want to break you in.”
“Why is that?”
“Because if I do it, I’ll do it right. Look at Eve. She’s a fucking slut puppy that would fuck anything or anyone and creams at the thought of having her tits slapped. She doesn’t just love to serve; she lives to serve. I would obliterate you, wipe out all that was Maddie, and turn you into a house pet.”
“That’s fucking hot, Daddy,” Maddie started to embrace him, but he pushed her aside.
“I told you no, and the first lesson you need to learn if you want to submit is to take no for an answer. It would be hard for me to do the things that I’d need to do to turn you into a good little bitch. I would need to string you up and crate train you, and I am not sure I could do that to my princess.”
“I understand, Daddy.”
“I have no fucking problem with it at all,” I added.
“I will be there to mentor you both. I will teach you how to train your sister, but I am not going to train her,” Dad decided.
Nikki was satisfied with that decision. We spent the next few days awkwardly shifting between master and slave, and brother and sister.
We created a hasty set of boundaries and limits, but I quickly found my sister was topping from the bottom because she was a natural brat. I continued to fuck her and Eve, and Dad even let me practice on Eve before I used my sister.
If I had to describe those first few awkward days, I would say they were a blur and a honeymoon of sorts. We didn’t know about the benefits of aftercare and tender touches after a painful session.
We accidentally invented it when Maddie broke down in tears after a particularly intense session. I had used my words to tease her for being a wishy-washy cunt, more than I had the lessons my father taught me on Shibari and how to swing a paddle like I meant it.
Mealtime was always awkward. Eve happily served all of us. I felt like my sister should be helping.
“Strip off during meals, and help Eve, Nikki,” I said.
“I am not interested in being a domestic servant,” she mused. “I don’t get off on being a maid.”
I knew better than to argue with her that the heart of submission was service. “Fine,” I grunted.
The twins wanted to use Maddie, and Eve and I allowed them to play with her. It was fun watching her eat their pussies. I was shocked that my little sisters had no qualms about incest. It felt like the two of them had been secretly making out for years when I watched the three of them get it on.
I started sleeping in Maddie’s room at night, and sometimes she slept in mine. There were times she was deeply into submitting, and other times she bristled at it.
My father had been right. Maddie wasn’t ready to commit to anything permanent, and I wasn’t ready to be a full-time Master. I lacked the experience and patience needed for the job.
Over the course of the next few months, I fell into a routine at home. I started bossing my sister around at home, but not at school. It was a comfortable arrangement that involved a lot of sex and not much else.
My mother texted me a few times while she was away on her trip to let me know she missed me. That pretty much ended my fantasy that Eve was somehow my mother in a hood.
“Am I going to have to keep my relationship with Nikki a secret from Mom when she gets home?”
“Not necessarily. You will have to talk to her about it. She knows I train bitches,” Dad reminded me. My father taught me to give Eve and Nikki enemas, whip them, slap them, tease them, and how to be a good master.
My sister hated some of it, but she never refused to endure anything. I felt like she was in competition with Eve. My sister obviously felt that if Eve could do it, she could do it.
He began taking Eve out of the house for extended periods. My father told me he was whoring her out locally for gang bangs and bachelor parties.
I didn’t dare to push things around school, or suggest Nikki and I should go as well. We had a verbal understanding on limits, and I was still unsure just how committed my sister was to serving me.
She continued dating guys at school. She didn’t ask me if she could go out on dates, and she managed her own social life and social media. I had fantasies of her wearing a butt plug at school without panties, but I kept them to myself.
My father often talked about his responsibility to check on a submissive’s well-being and ensure they are getting what they need.
“You treat Eve like a cum-dump,” I reminded him one day.
“That’s because the woman is a cum-dump, and she likes it that way. She gets off on serving. She’s enjoyed her time here, but I think it’s time for her to go back into service rotation.”
Eve’s body language shifted. She had on the leather hood, but I could picture a dog’s sad eyes when they beg for food silently by looking pitiful.
“Sorry, Eve, you’ve been a good slut. I told you not to get attached to the role.”
Eve nodded.
“Suck my son’s cock one last time before I crate you up, and ship you off,” he instructed.
Eve’s body language was forlorn and wistful. There was a melancholy nature to how she knelt down and looked up at me. The look in her eyes made me feel like she was trying to say that everything would be alright as she stroked me to get me hard.
Glug-glug-glug, she throated my cock just the way that I liked.
“I am going to miss the way you sucked a dick, Eve,” I patted her leather hood and told her she was a good girl as I luxuriated after my orgasm.
“Hold the cum in your mouth, squat in front of me, hands out in front of you. Deeper! Yes, stay like that.”
“Son, go get your sisters. I want them to see her like this, when they say their goodbyes, so they know what a depraved cocksucker Eve truly is. I don’t want them feeling sad that she’s gone.”
“Why not send Eve?”
“Because I am telling you to do it, and I make the rules in the house, son. I was worried once you became a Master that you’d start to second guess me.”
“Sorry, Dad,” I apologized and went to get my sisters. I stopped at Nikki’s room, and she was sitting at her dresser applying makeup, fully dressed.
“Hey whore, get your collar on and take all your clothes off. Dad wants you downstairs so you can say goodbye to Eve. We’ll probably want you to gobble my spunk out of her mouth.”
“Oh, did Eve already suck your dick? Damn, you need to bring some friends over. I just put on a fresh coat of lipstick,” she smacked her lips playfully. It was the first time she mentioned having other sex partners involved.
“I thought you were concerned about your reputation at school,” I said as I watched her stand up and remove the outfit she had on.
“I am, but I assumed you’d want to show me off to some of your friends. Nobody would believe that I am your slut, little brother.”
I smacked her ass hard with my hand, and corrected her. “Who am I?”
“You haven’t been acting like my master, lately. You’ve been asking me to do things, and not telling me.”
“Get your butt plug up your ass. The big one! How is that for telling?”
“Can I at least finger my ass a little first,” she half joked. I normally let her lube up and finger her asshole until she was wide enough to take it.
“Eve can take it dry. She’s going away, so now you’ll have to learn to accept dick from me and my friends anytime we want your filthy shithole.”
“Mmmm, hot,” Nikki grinned just before grunting through the discomfort of plugging her ass.
I went to the twins’ room next, and they told me to come in. They were both naked. It seemed like Dani and Marie were fucking each other with strap-ons.
“Oh Christ, which one of you is going to be the mistress?”
“We are trying to decide that,” Marie smiled boldly.
“You seem like the more dominant one,” I shrugged.
“That’s what I said!” Dani agreed with me while taking it up the ass from her twin sister.
“I said that I don’t want to be in charge, that’s why I let you ream my ass, you silly bitch!”
“You can work this out later,” I said. My mind was blown, but it shouldn’t have been. The signs that the twins had some sort of sexual power exchange brewing had been there all along.
The girls decided to follow me back to the kitchen wearing just their strap-on belts with latex dildos.
“You can get dressed first,” I said as I explained we needed to say goodbye to Eve.
“Oh fuck, no!” they both cried out. “Dad and Eve have seen us naked plenty of times. If you can train Nikki, we can train each other.”
“I am not doing it 50/50, Dani! I can’t switch back and forth,” Dani argued.
“I am not going to be in charge. The dominant just tells you what to do, the submissive actually gets to do it!”
I hadn’t thought about it like that. Nikki joined us with a chuckle when she saw her little sisters naked.
“Don’t laugh, bitch. We are still above you in the hierarchy!” Dani assured her.
“Yeah, if Eve is going away, that puts you at the very bottom,” Marie added.
“Good, I am tired of half-assing this. Maybe one of you two can train and discipline me when Luke is not available.”
“I’d train you more often, but you are always busy with school or guys,” I replied. My little sisters didn’t want the job anyway.
“I could say the same about you,” she scoffed as we walked into the kitchen.
Eve squatting with cum in her mouth was not shocking to any of us. She was in the same position she was when I had left her.
“Took you long enough,” Dad wasn’t surprised that all the girls were naked. They quickly explained that they both wanted to be submissive in their relationship. It became clear to me that they were jealous of what Nikki and I had, because they kept mentioning how they wanted to experience it.
“Figures, I do something and you two want to get in on it,” Nikki laughed.
“It doesn’t surprise me that any of you are naturally inclined toward submission, but I want you to understand that the role isn’t glamorous or easy. Take a good long look at Eve. This is your future as a cum-bucket.”
“I want to be a submissive only to girls,” Marie said.
“Says the slut with the dildo shaped like a guy’s cock,” Nikki joked.
“Nikki, squat down and face Eve, mouth wide open, but no talking,” I said sternly.
Nikki rolled her eyes and lazily adopted the position, even when I smacked her ass.
“What are you going to do when your mom returns? Are you going to walk around with strap-ons?” he asked the girls. “You going to top from the bottom and squat at the dinner table like you are doing your brother a favor during meals?”
“I’d imagine Mom won’t allow us to continue like this in the common areas,” I said.
“You’ll have to talk to her about it. I’d imagine the rules will have to be discussed. She’s coming home today. That’s why Eve has to go.”
“Ashamed of her?” Nikki chuckled.
“Control your slut, or I will gag her,” my father insisted.
I grabbed my sister by her hair, pulled her forward on her hands and knees, stuck her ass up, and slapped her pussy hard ten times while she counted them out. “Shut your mouth, Nikki. Do you want Mom to see you get pussy spanked for being a brat?”