One of the Best Stories Eddie Will Probably Ever Read
Copyright© 2026 by Mike McGifford (I have permission to post it)
Chapter 4
Coming of Age Sex Story: Chapter 4 - I didn't write this. Mike McGifford did. I put it in the coming-of-age category, but it's also so much more. BDSM and incest, embarrassed nude females, and all the perverted shit that I enjoy rolled up into one delicious dish. Mike can take the subtle and mundane life of a family that happens to have a kinky side business and let you experience life with them through word pictures. It's not the best story I ever wrote. It's one of the best I have ever read.
Caution: This Coming of Age Sex Story contains strong sexual content, including Ma/Fa mt/ft Ma/ft Teenagers Consensual Incest BDSM DomSub MaleDom Humiliation Facial Oral Sex Sex Toys Illustrated
“Hehe, I love how you get like a caffeinated puppy with a rubber ball when I tease you,” I said, realizing that I really was teasing her with my bold statements about her kids.
Her eager reaction and excited butt wiggles prompted me down another path.
“I bet I could do really degrading things to you and you’d be thrilled,” I said with a grin.
Again, Eve nodded excitedly and shook her shoulders, making her tits bounce. A definite yes.
“Nah, trust me, you don’t want me to do THOSE things,” I gave her my best evil grin.
Eve cocked her hooded head as if curious about what I was imagining.
I decided to tell her, to make her a little scared of me.
“Well, I’d pull your asshole inside out and make you wiggle it like a tail. I’d probably write “WORST MOM EVER” and make you lick your own shit, while filming you and telling you I’d be sending the clip to your kids. Obviously, they’d never see it because I don’t know them, but I’d want to test just how far I could go with you since you like it so much ... It’d be like a game. Evaluate you for Dad. Find your limits.”
I had no intention of doing those things, I just wanted to see how far I could push her buttons.
Eve nodded again and gave me a ‘bring it on’ hand gesture as if agreeing with me or maybe daring me to go to those extremes.
I smiled at how she must think she was bulletproof.
“Haha, I’m sure you have limits even though you may think you don’t!”
Eve shook her head, disagreeing with me with the rest of her body. I loved how her tits jiggled.
They were so white against her dark skin, they were like little blinkers or flags bouncing up and down for yes or in a worried back and forth for no.
I got the impression that she was calling my bluff.
I had probably been a bit over the top and she knew I wasn’t likely to go that far.
Eve was a puzzle wrapped in a mystery. She wasn’t like any of my father’s other slaves that I met.
There was something different about her.
The hood kept her facial expressions obscured, but I could read her emotions from her body language.
It was like I knew her, but at the same time her willingness to submit and be degraded wasn’t simply for money or some lack of self-esteem.
Eve had a true desire to be nasty as fuck and I loved that.
I just didn’t fully understand it because I’d never met anyone like Eve.
I had no frame of reference and that’s why I wanted to push her buttons and learn about what made her tick.
“What if I took a hammer and smashed your titty? I bet you’d wish I hadn’t!”
Eve nodded and kind of wobbled her head like those bobblehead toys. Was she agreeing or giving me permission?
This was getting confusing again. She pantomimed being knocked out and falling over in a comedic way.
“I wouldn’t really mess up Dad’s property. Your titty is safe,” I pinched her nipple and squeezed it under my thumb and finger.
She stood there, tits out and waited for me to finish playing with her.
“I assure you, you wouldn’t like getting hit with a hammer. You should probably not encourage your future owners to do that to you,” I advised her and said, “They may not have as much restraint as I do.”
Eve nodded obediently. I couldn’t see her face but from her body language she seemed to accept my advice eagerly.
I let go of her tit and flicked the bottom as I released it.
She didn’t flinch away or even rub it when I was done.
“I guess you aren’t Dad’s property when you go back to your family, and your husband, are you?”
She shrugged.
“You want to be my father’s property all the time?” I asked.
Eager, almost puppy-like enthusiasm exuded from every pore.
I imagined her poor schlep of a husband. He probably had no idea where she was, and he was stuck taking care of their kids.
I felt a little contempt for Eve that she’d be so willing to leave them behind to live a life as a full-time slave, but that was her choice.
“Talking about you being Dad’s property reminds me of why we’re here. Maddie and I are going to evaluate you. We’re going to judge you even though you’re old enough to be our mom. How does that make you feel, being judged by a pair of teenagers?”
Eve shuddered again, but glancing down at her cunt, I could see she was leaking girl goo all over her thighs.
Was she scared, or would it be more accurate to imagine she was ready to cum?
“Maddie, is Eve close to cumming?” I asked, an evil thought entering my head.
“You’re kidding me, right?” she responded much more civilly than her usual, but she couldn’t leave it at that.
“You must be so much fun to fuck,” she deadpanned. “Hey, are you cumming?”
Maddie made a face like she was going to barf.
“I love you as a brother, not a lover, Pukey Lukey, so I’ll teach you something I don’t even teach the guys I bang. If you have to ask if she is cumming, then she isn’t and if you ask if you are in, then you aren’t.”
“You snarky cunt,” I brought my knee up playfully and tried to kick her in the thigh, but she danced away from me, laughing, and went up to Eve.
Without hesitation my sister grabbed Eve’s boobs and honked them like the twin horns, giggling “arooogah!”
That got the ball rolling. We each did our own thing to Eve’s body, and she basically had sex with us both simultaneously, but it didn’t feel like we were doing it together as a threesome at all.
Maddie did her own thing with Eve, and I felt like I just happened to be there.
I wasn’t really prepared to come into contact with my sister’s skin, so I wasn’t ready for how soft and warm it was, or how taboo it felt when I did.
Maddie didn’t seem to be too bothered.
I did, but not in a grossed out sort of way I expected.
It was one thing to fuck one of Dad’s slutty bitches.
They’ve presumably been fucked every day all the time while they serve.
Maddie was into sex, but it just felt different for me—like I knew I shouldn’t have connected, but I did.
Then Maddie reached over Eve with a look of chagrin and cupped my balls and then squeezed gently, like in retaliation for me touching her.
“You got your side, I got mine. Don’t do that thing. You made me squirt a little girly juice and now I have to take a shower.”
She was obviously teasing me like she did at the breakfast table, but it felt flattering and familiar this time.
It made this whole preposterous idea of a strange woman dad had moved in for a couple of days getting fucked by me and my sister together, seem ... Funny?
Sexy? No, those words don’t fit. It just wasn’t so weird, is all.
I wasn’t going to leave Eve out. I was inside her pussy, thanks to a condom Maddie had produced then had to show me how to use.
I pumped slowly, then fast, then slow again, just whatever my cock wanted in the moment, enjoying the feeling and experimenting with angles.
The condom made me feel like I could fuck forever!
I could feel Eve’s butt plug if I did a certain thing, and not if I did something else. Certain angles tightened Eve’s cunt and others loosened her up. I didn’t pay any attention to Eve’s pleasure.
A moment of silence passed between us, and I felt a warm hand on my butt, gently guiding me.
“Here is another tip, Turbo. We don’t like it when you go jazz jackrabbit and then slow. Pick a speed and drive deep, withdraw consistently, and fuck her like you’re trying to break her pussy, and you want to fuck right through her. Don’t pace yourself. Fuck her like you own her.”
Maddie and I both saw Eve shake her head negatively before I could tell my sister to shove her advice up her ass where it came from.
“What’s that, Lassie? Timmy fell down the well?” Maddie became amused when Eve disagreed with her.
“No one cares what you think, Eve. You are just a cum hole for him to practice laying his pipe.”
Eve nodded vigorously to indicate that she agreed.
“I have a reputation to uphold. I don’t want my brother to fuck girls the way guys usually fuck me. Put a finger up her ass, grab a titty, don’t just hump. Get nasty, because I know you are a nasty little fucker like me, aren’t you, bro?”
Damn, it was hard not to smile. I didn’t make eye contact with Maddie.
I tried not to explode in Eve’s pussy, but it wasn’t how tight and awesome it felt.
It felt good, like a warm, loving pocket that was clean, and I could do anything I wanted with.
It was hearing my sister talk dirty that made me almost spunk into the condom.
“How about I give you some advice during sex, Maddie?”
I said slowly as I fucked Eve deep and hard, the way she suggested.
“What are you going to teach me?”
“Don’t talk during sex, it’s annoying as fuck,” I said, without realizing it came off like a perfect deadpan zinger.
I really just wanted my sister to shut the fuck up, so I could concentrate and stop thinking about her perfect, young tits pressed up against this sexy woman, old enough to be our mom.
Eve began to laugh under the gag; her ribs started to quake, and her entire demeanor changed just from the relief of her body no longer being so stiff.
Unless you count her clutching cunt around my cock. I’ve never felt as much like being milked as I did then.
I could tell she was smiling under the hood even though it was hidden.
Maddie chuckled, “Okay, you got me. If I talk again, you can shove something down my throat to shut me up,” she joked lightly.
Maddie’s last words made me imagine forcing my cock as far down her throat as possible and that was too much.
“You motherfucker, Maddie!” I hollered as her visual set me off, and I shot the biggest load of my life into Eve.
Yes, it was fantastic blowing my wad into such an awesome fucking bitch, but at the same time, I was angry at my sister for forcing my cum out of me before I was ready.
Even as I jerked my hips and smashed my groin as hard against Eve’s flaps as I could, probably bruising them, my mind wasn’t shutting down and resetting like it usually did when my jizz started pumping.
Maddie hadn’t said that as a joke, but as a taunt.
I’d let myself get complacent around her because I was preoccupied with my second ever true fuck.
For a little while I’d felt like my sister was treating me as an equal and I’d basked in the glow of it but now she’d pissed me off.
She had to know what she was doing and even though she didn’t mean it, all I wanted to do once my body was under my own control again was to fucking do what she’d said.
Grab her face and gag her with my cock.
No, better still, punish her THEN fucking choke her on cock.
And she couldn’t complain because she’s fucking told me to.
The long seconds of not being in control of my body while my cum filled the condom finally passed, and I was able to relax.
“Dayaaam, bro, I thought you were gonna force your whole body inside her when you came,” Maddie joked then told me to make sure the condom stayed on when I pulled out.
There she goes again, telling me what to do, I seethed as I did what she said because, well, duh.
But I probably would have done it without her ‘telling’ me to. Maybe.
When I withdrew, keeping the condom on, Maddie was right there.
I should have slapped her hands away but for some reason I didn’t, instead letting her take my still-erect member gently in hand to carefully peel the condom off.
“That is a fuck ton of cum and your cock’s still hard!”
Maddie actually sounded awed by the amount of cum she was seeing in the condom she held up like a trophy for Eve to see.
“Usually a dude deflates like a balloon and is halfway dressed again by now,” she admitted reverently as she massaged the used condom like she was trying to gauge exactly how much cum I’d produced.
I almost gloatingly told her it was my second cum of the evening, but I was still pissed at her.
Then her next action left me momentarily speechless.
“Waste not the seed of man,” Maddie declared as if she was quoting some Bible verse or something.
She held up the condom and treated it like a freezer pop, squeezing the bulb end and forcing my jizz out the opening at the other end, right into her own upturned mouth!
My mouth dropped open and my eyes bugged. Maddie was swallowing my cum!
Her eyes were closed like she was trying not to think about whose cum it was, but she wasn’t shy about poking the tip of her tongue into the open end like she was worried she’d miss a last, viscous drop.
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