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One of the Best Stories Eddie Will Probably Ever Read

Copyright© 2026 by Mike McGifford (I have permission to post it)

Chapter 3

Coming of Age Sex Story: Chapter 3 - I didn't write this. Mike McGifford did. I put it in the coming-of-age category, but it's also so much more. BDSM and incest, embarrassed nude females, and all the perverted shit that I enjoy rolled up into one delicious dish. Mike can take the subtle and mundane life of a family that happens to have a kinky side business and let you experience life with them through word pictures. It's not the best story I ever wrote. It's one of the best I have ever read.

Caution: This Coming of Age Sex Story contains strong sexual content, including Ma/Fa   mt/ft   Ma/ft   Teenagers   Consensual   Incest   BDSM   DomSub   MaleDom   Humiliation   Facial   Oral Sex   Sex Toys   Illustrated  

Maddie was Maddie, my older Sister. She’s precocious, outspoken, sometimes a smart-assed bitch, hot as hell, popular, cocky, confident, and I love her as a sister and I knew she loved me as a brother even though we tease each other and bicker at times.

I’d always respected her because I’d always respected that she was Dad’s little princess. But she’s not my princess; she is my sister. I didn’t HAVE to allow her to get away with her shit even if Dad does. I could have told her what I was okay with her doing to Eve. I’m a full member of the family, after all.

I have a say – at least, that’s how I felt.

The way Maddie had asked if I wanted to double team Eve echoed in my head. Maddie liked the idea, and that’s what freaked me out! I did not expect her to want to fuck with another girl, much less involve me.

I initially suspected she might be testing to see if I’d go for it only so she could call me a weird, incestuous pervert. Yet, she was all in- nothing about her offer seemed like a trap.

Now that I’d thought about it and had figured out what was going on in my head, a plan came to me. Let Maddie help me with Eve, but on my terms.

I pulled up my pants, flushed the toilet more out of habit than anything else, and left the bathroom, returning to the dining room and collected my thoughts on what to do next.

Eve was finishing up by clearing the plates from the table. Her ass was really red.

“There you are,” Dad said with a smile. “Did everything come out okay?”

He asked it the way he usually did after I’d spent more than a minute in the bathroom. I rolled my eyes at his lame joke and decided to just come right out with what I wanted to say.

“I want to spend some alone time with Eve, and I want Maddie to join us. I don’t trust Maddie alone with Eve, so I want to be in charge.”

I wasn’t asking – I was telling my dad and Maddie how I wanted it to be. I assumed Eve had no say anyway – she was our toy.

“Hey, I’m older than you. I should be in charge!” Maddie complained without a hint of reluctance. I thought she might be a little coy about telling Dad our father that we were going to share this strange woman he brought home to train. She was calm and business-like as if she was asking to borrow the keys to his car to take me to the mall.

She didn’t balk about having sex with me there, though. I was shocked she wouldn’t at least make a wisecrack about not getting spunk all over her by accident or shooting my load too early.

“Dad had to warn you that you weren’t to damage her. That means he shares my concerns. Take it or leave it, sis,” I said, making sure I was leaving no room in my voice for argument.

I felt like if I waffled, Maddie would end up running things and laughing at my dick or something.

“That would be my decision, Luke,” Dad said.

“You said you have no interest in seeing any of us fucking Eve, but I don’t care if Maddie sees me, and it doesn’t bother me seeing her, Dad,” I reminded him.

“Well, you do have a point,” Dad mused with a grin. “If you two are cool with it, I am cool with it. Just don’t damage my merchandise.”

“Okay, I’m in,” Maddie agreed, surprising us both. I could tell she was waiting for a reaction from me, and when I played it cool, Maddie seemed disappointed. I think she wanted to shock me.

“Maddie, you know what Luke’s suggesting?” Dad asked my sister, as if he couldn’t quite believe he had heard correctly. He didn’t have to say the word incest – we were all thinking it. At least, I was.

We would be doing things to this woman together- but it was still odd for a sister and brother to share a partner.

I was with Dad on that. I’d imagined a scenario where I’d have to force the issue and probably make an enemy of Maddie. I was ready to provide proof of times Maddie had gone too far, had lied, had broken promises, all sorts of things that had made me resent my sister. Her just up and agreeing without a fight left me off balance.

“Sure, Daddy,” Maddie replied with her smarmy, perfect smile, like a happy poodle after getting a treat. She was all smiles and cuteness with him.

“What’s the big deal? Luke wants to be the big man in charge. So let him. If he tells me to do something I don’t want to do, I don’t have to do it. I don’t care. I’m certainly not intimidated by the idea of watching him screw Eve’s big fat ass. I might even be able to give him some pointers,” she said as if she was really the caring sibling Dad thought she was. “Just as long as he doesn’t hog her. I want a proper go at her too.”

Eve wiggled her butt quietly like an eager puppy that knows someone is about to take them outside for a walk.

“The two of you together wasn’t what I was imagining when I asked for help, guys. Maddie, you’re a fully developed woman,” he said, glancing towards Dani and Marie like what he wasn’t saying was, ‘compared to your sisters’.

Maddie ignored the unintended jab at her sisters who Dad had only an hour earlier called ‘old enough’. Instead, she took an unexpected approach.

“I’m not body shy, Daddy,” she said with a giggle. “If there’s anything we’ve learned being your kids, it’s that. I can’t speak for Luke and his slinky dinky peanut winky, but if he’s game, so am I.”

The look Maddie gave me was the one where she thinks she’s really got all the power. I couldn’t wait to wipe that smirk off her face.

As for Maddie’s comment, it could have been taken as a joke, but I knew she meant it. The bitch really was insinuating that I have a tiny cock and would chicken out of letting her see it. That only made me want to do it more! I wanted to put her in her place, but I couldn’t think of a suitably scathing comeback before Dad spoke again.

“You two being individually invited to fuck a consenting adult is altogether a different thing than teaming up on her,” Dad said, before pausing for a long time, deep in thought.

No one could rush Dad when he was thinking, and we all knew better than to try. That didn’t stop Dani and Marie from having one of their wordless conversations, and it didn’t stop me from stewing over Maddie’s insult. I finally came up with a zinger, and again, Dad blocked it by making his decision.

“You know what, guys? I’d be a hypocrite if I said no, so fine. But not until after you’ve both finished your homework,” Dad said, looking intently at Maddie, letting her know he was aware she’d slacked off before dinner.

At least Maddie had the sense to blush.

“Did you guys get your homework done?” Dad asked Dani and Marie, causing more blushing from the twins.

“Almost,” Dani replied.

“We still have some reading to do,” Marie added. I’d almost forgotten they were listening in to our plans for Eve.

“It was too noisy at Macy’s place,” Dani finished her thought, then launched into the drama that was occurring at their friend’s place down the road.

Between the twins switching seamlessly back and forth with their narration, we heard all about the distant neighbor’s home life. The girls claimed their friend’s Sister was screwing her mom’s boyfriend, and she’d found out while they were there.

Dad eventually took control of the conversation back after Dani relayed how her friend’s mom had told her daughter right in front of everyone that she was going to spank the living hell out of Barbie’s ass.

“I think it’s time we wrap it up about the life and times of the Petersons’ girls. I know I wouldn’t like it one bit if I discovered another family was sitting at their dining table talking about ours. Although that brings up a good point, guys. You all had a turn with Eve, and now I want to see Luke spank Eve like the rest of you did. Eve, Present to Luke,” Dad ordered without so much as raising his voice.

I was about to ask Dad what Present meant, but Eve had already risen from her squat and came around the table between Dad and me. Eager, enthusiastic and stepping lively to get to me from where she was without hesitation.

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She executed a precise but sexy turn like models do, so she was facing away from me before bending deeply at the waist, putting her butt practically in my face. Her ass was maybe 2 feet away from me, and I could see every detail of it – the wrinkles, the bumps, the crease, previous spank marks – the big butt plug.

Her breathing was even and since I couldn’t see her face, it was impossible to tell if she was excited, frightened, nervous, anxious. I assumed women like this bitch liked to get spanked and would see it as a thrill.

Eve’s ass wasn’t filtered like porn is. I could see all her skin’s imperfections and the stripes I’d admired from afar earlier. Her butt plug spread her cheeks just a little, and I could see how much her pucker was spread by the slimmer shaft before the plug’s flange.

Part of me wanted to reach out and simply touch the plug to prove it was real. It’s one thing to know what a butt plug is, but a whole other level to see a woman with one filling her asshole. I didn’t actually do that, though. I didn’t want to look like a perv or some inexperienced kid in front of Maddie.

“Her ass isn’t toxic, spank her so we can go play,” Maddie was literally daring me to spank this strange woman’s big ass.

“Why should I spank her? She didn’t do anything wrong,” I shrugged.

“In Eve’s case, the spanking is a maintenance spanking. It just keeps her in the right mind set, and it’s more an evaluation of how you play than how she endures pain,” Dad said plainly.

Eve nodded her agreement but didn’t move from the position.
It wasn’t just my sense of sight that was being challenged, of course. I could smell her sweat and arousal, and my cock immediately sprang to attention again.

“I told the girls already, Luke. Before you spank her, run your hand gently over her skin. Really lightly. Feel her through your fingertips. Get to know the surface you’re going to punish. You can grope and knead her butt if that feels more natural to you, but like I said, before you spank her, I want you to be super gentle. It will have as much of an effect on her as it will on you,” Dad instructed.

“Yeah, she really started dripping when I did it,” Marie said proudly.

“She was already soaked from me doing it,” Dani added as if one-upping her sister.

I hesitantly reached out with the back of my hand and stroked Eve’s left butt cheek from top to bottom, parallel to her crack. Then, without breaking contact, I slid my fingertips across the gap in her thighs and stroked the other cheek in the other direction up to her waist. I watched as goosebumps appeared on her skin. I then traced the welts that fascinated me so much. They really were slightly raised.

I could have kneaded her butt cheeks, and I considered it, but instead, I was satisfied with memorizing the topology of her ass, deciding exactly where I wanted to leave handprints.

I doubt Eve was ready for the first spank, but she didn’t flinch when I landed it with a satisfactory crack like a gunshot. I was a little disappointed at getting no reaction from her, but everyone except Dad gave me one. Even Maddie let out a soft ooh sound as if in appreciation.

“Holy cow, that was loud!” Dani exclaimed after a moment.

“I know, right!” Marie echoed her sister. It was cute to me that they could be so filthy about some things but still say “Holy Cow”.

“Well done, Luke. You’re a natural,” Dad praised me. That was the best compliment ever.

I would note that I suppose I read too many sex stories online. I kind of expected Eve to thank me and ask for another before I remembered she was gagged under the hood.

My second slap wasn’t nearly as good on the other cheek, and I realized that if I was going to do it right, I’d need to stand up, turn around, and position myself better. I ignored the tenting in my pants and did just that.

Eve’s tight ass barely moved. I think she was not impressed but too well trained to laugh. Maddie let me know with a giggle that she didn’t think I was trying very hard.

“Are you trying to bore her to death or tickle her?” She said, but I didn’t dignify the question with a response. I was determined to spank her properly and not go overboard but make sure that this bitch felt it.

After the next two spanks, one on each cheek, both as good as the first, I once again ran my hand over Eve’s ass. Already, I could feel the heat I’d generated, and Eve’s exposed cunt was separating and getting really juicy.

After a dozen more swats, Eve’s ass was trembling and her butt plug was twitching and pushing out a quarter inch by itself, as if begging to be yanked out. I felt like I had actually accomplished something.

I doubted it was the spanking of a lifetime, and I was positive my father would make her really quiver, but it wasn’t something Maddie could laugh at, and Eve seemed to respect it.

I was tempted to keep spanking or take the plug out of her butt and shove it in further with a twist. Eve’s ass was sweaty now, and the musk of her pussy drippings told me that I had managed to arouse her.

“You dirty slut, only a pig would get turned on this way,” I added.

She nodded slowly and maintained the present position.

Dad had been clear. No fooling with Eve sexually while he was in the room. I was just to spank her and I had done that.

He didn’t want to see his kids sexing up a trainee. So, I took a step back and slowly admired my work.

“Nicely done, kiddo,” my sister patronized me.

I flipped her off and didn’t look at her. “I’d give you something worse,” I assured her.

“Before or after I put my foot up your ass?” She teased playfully. I didn’t take the bait. I was not in the mood to play that game with her.

Eve’s ass was once again bright red, and she had a trail of girl goo on one thigh halfway to her knee. She looked stunning. I wanted nothing more than to bone her pussy in that moment, knowing her ass was still stuffed with the plug.

“Did you just cum?” Maddie asked as if she thought I shot my load.

“No! I replied, louder than I needed to.

“I meant Eve, dipstick!” Maddie replied, pointing at the trainee’s ass. I realized that I had just tipped my hand, and I began to blush, but kept my face turned away so that Maddie could not see my reaction.

Eve’s cunt was twitching as if grasping for a cock that wasn’t there.

“This dirty little bitch?” I reached under her pussy and felt her up, even though my father said nothing sexual. I was checking her dipstick – not masturbating her. Eve’s pussy was pumping and quivering spastically and I was thrilled that I had done that to her.

“I think she did!” Dad chuckled. “Naughty, Eve! She should be much better at holding it than that! You weren’t here to get your jollies, you naughty pig. Stand up!” He ordered.

Eve immediately stood straight, like she was at attention with her forearms one atop the other behind her back, above her waist. Once again, she was blushing halfway to her hard nipples.

“What the hell, Eve? This is not your first day of training,” Dad chastised her, but he wasn’t actually angry.

It was more like he’d expected it and was basking in the pleasure of being right. Eve hung her head as much as her collar would allow, like she was apologizing.

“Go get the kitchen cleaned up,” he said softly to her, surprising me. He should have been angry. “Guys, homework,” he said to us.

 
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