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One of the Best Stories Eddie Will Probably Ever Read

Copyright© 2026 by Mike McGifford (I have permission to post it)

Chapter 2

Coming of Age Sex Story: Chapter 2 - I didn't write this. Mike McGifford did. I put it in the coming-of-age category, but it's also so much more. BDSM and incest, embarrassed nude females, and all the perverted shit that I enjoy rolled up into one delicious dish. Mike can take the subtle and mundane life of a family that happens to have a kinky side business and let you experience life with them through word pictures. It's not the best story I ever wrote. It's one of the best I have ever read.

Caution: This Coming of Age Sex Story contains strong sexual content, including Ma/Fa   mt/ft   Ma/ft   Teenagers   Consensual   Incest   BDSM   DomSub   MaleDom   Humiliation   Facial   Oral Sex   Sex Toys   Illustrated  

How had it made her feel when Dad casually said she’d be whipped? Eve, though hooded, was an expressive mime because she carefully pantomimed her emotions. I had the distinct impression that she was simply accepting this was the way things had to be.

Dad paused, then asked the girls as if he was offering to take them fishing, “Would you be able to whip her if she had made food you don’t like?”

Dani and Marie looked at each other, silently communicating as they do, before Marie answered, “Is that part of Eve’s training? I wouldn’t do it just because I was mad at her. I don’t even know her.”

“Good answer, sweetheart! Yes, Eve’s learned to be a masochist. Being spanked, flogged, whipped, and caned turns her on, but when she’s a good girl and takes her punishment without cumming, I usually like to reward her with one. Sometimes she’s not a good girl, and she needs to be truly punished. Then she isn’t allowed a cum. It can confuse Eve’s poor little brain when she’s naughty and still gets to cum.”

As mean as it sounded to tease this woman about her intelligence, I felt my boner throb in my jeans. Eve’s face was covered by her leather hood, but her body language made it seem like she thought it was funny to be described as having a limited intelligence that’s unable to process pleasure as a reward when it’s not deserved.

“The thing is, it’s not the spanking that’s the punishment. It’s withholding an orgasm. She already came four times today, but sometimes she doesn’t get any at all. Missing out on an orgasm is the real punishment. She’s been trained to crave them constantly.”

“Oh wow,” Maddie remarked, a thoughtful look on her face. So, what’s to stop her jilling off constantly? I can’t even imagine being told I couldn’t if I wanted to.”

I didn’t want to hear that my older sister got herself off. I was sure she did, but she could probably call a guy day or night, and he’d drive over just to eat her pussy and gain her approval.

“I know!” The twins said in unison, then giggled at each other.

I didn’t want to hear that either.

I tried to close my ears. I’d never considered the idea of any of my sisters rubbing one out. I mean, I knew Maddie has had sex. God, all my friends can’t keep their thoughts to themselves when they start talking about her and who her boyfriend of the week will be next week, but as far as I knew or wanted to know, Dani and Marie were virgins. I preferred to think they’d always be virgins.

“A good slave won’t, unless she’s given explicit permission to,” Dad explained, not embarrassed to be talking about sex with his daughters. “It’s part of what makes them a good slave and not just hypersexual. Once upon a time, we used to call such a woman a nymphomaniac. But women already like that are practically useless to me.”

“How do you find the sort of woman who is willing to be trained to get orgasms, though?” Maddie pressed.

“A big of part of my job is to help a woman learn to cum easily, frequently, and on command. I prefer to start with women who never even learned much about sex or how to cum, and to promote hypersexuality in a controlled environment. The sort of woman who was raised religiously, for example.”

“Like Mom? Dani asked.

We all knew about Mom being raised in a conservative Christian home.

“Just like your mom, Dani,” Dad beamed.

“When I find such a woman, I’ll introduce her to great sex, then help her understand that the reward for good service is a decent orgasm. Well, lots of them. Earned orgasms, though, not stolen ones. A woman who genuinely wants to be a slave will earnestly work for her reward many times a day. Like Eve.”

“How long has Eve been a slave?” Marie asked.

“For years,” Dad replied. “Before Maddie was even born,” He laughed as if only he knew the joke. “She was an absolute dead fish when I first took her to bed. Now she regularly gets at least a dozen orgasms a day because she’s a very good girl.”

“So ... let me get this straight,” I said, finally joining the conversation. Eve gets paid in orgasms, and she actually likes being hurt? Doesn’t that make her crazy? I mean ... like certifiable? No sane person would want that!”

“Eve’s not crazy, Luke,” Dad said as if disappointed in me. “She’s just had her pleasure centers identified and unlocked. She’s special in that she has a perfect slave mentality. She can operate just like a regular person for days, sometimes weeks on end. But since she first understood how she’s wired, her preference is to immerse herself in the lifestyle full-time. She doesn’t feel fulfilled unless she’s serving, cumming, and being fucked as much as her holes can stand. It’s why she’s plugged now. I saw you looking at her ass,” He smirked, making me blush.

“So, she’s a slave full-time? Wow, what a trip!” Marie blurted. “Do anything you are told, no job, no car, no retirement plan, no pay, where do I sign up?”

“She WANTS to be a slave full-time, Marie. If the next couple of days work out, she may just get her wish and no longer have to pretend to not be one. Some women want to wake up every day knowing exactly what is expected of them, and live to please others,” my father explained.

Eve nodded her head up and down slowly and held up a thumb.

“But what about her family? Wouldn’t they miss her?” Dani asked while ignoring Eve as if she were a decoration or a part of the furniture.

I wondered if Eve found that degrading, or if she was used to being treated that way. Imagine being nude in a room full of clothed people and being ignored while they theorize why you are there, and they never think to ask you.

“What makes you think she’s got family?” Dad asked, sounding a little unsure of himself for the first time.

“The scar,” Marie said. “She’s had a baby, and her boobs haven’t dropped around her waist, so she can’t be that old. She’s either a mom or she gave up her baby,” my sister said, showing surprising intelligence.

“She’s older than she looks,” Dad said, sounding relieved. “Her kids are all grown.”

“Kids? Like multiple? I would hope to look half as good after just one. How many does she have?” Maddie asked.

“Yep,” He shrugged. “One of whom wants to be trained. If Eve doesn’t cut the mustard after this evaluation, I may swap them out,” he snickered in Eve’s direction.

I could tell that Eve didn’t seem as enthusiastic about that idea as she had being degraded and teased earlier.

I had so many questions now – what did her family think about her as a slave? Did they ever visit her? How did she tell them? What did Eve do when she was back home between assignments?

“We’ve managed to get off topic, here, guys,” Dad said, holding up a hand to forestall further questions. “There are still plenty of things we need to go over. Number one, who here finds the idea of punishing Eve distasteful? In a “I simply could not do it’ sort of way?”

None of us said anything, and no hands went up. Dad nodded and smiled after that.

“Good, because Eve needs that firm hand. But no whips, chains, paddles, or using any of my motivational toys on her until I deem you to be ready. Especially you, Luke,” Dad said, looking at me like he thought I’d whip the snot out of her.

“What? Why look at me, Dad? I’m not the one who popped her for no reason!” I replied, staring daggers at Maddie.

“You’re a young man, Luke. You don’t know your own strength,” Dad explained, mollifying me.

Actually, his explanation caused me to mentally puff out my chest. Maybe physically a little as well, until Maddie grinned at me.

“Next, and this really is specifically aimed at you, Luke. You are not to fuck Eve’s cunt without a condom. She’s got an asshole if you want to ride her bareback. That stunt you pulled with Domonique a couple of months ago caused a pregnancy scare. Do I make myself clear? As for you girls_”

“Whoa, back up, Dad,” Maddie cut him off. “Are you saying Luke raped a trainee or something?” This time Maddie was staring daggers at me.

“No!” I practically yelled. “She said I could!”

“Wind it down an octave, guys,” Dad lifted both hands in a placating gesture. “I didn’t say that at all, Maddie. Luke was given permission, but then he roughed her up. Dominique had been denied for 3 days, and she was jonesing for cock. Do you think she’d tell him to pause and use a condom? It was still a very stupid risk to take, Luke. For all you knew, Dominique could have had a disease. It’s why she hadn’t been boned in 3 days in the first place. She was waiting for her test results. Luckily, they came back negative.

Oh God. It had never occurred to me that I could have gotten a disease on my maiden voyage, much less made a woman pregnant. I was too young for that! Fuuuuuck. Never again! Eve’s cunt was safe from me, for sure!

“Now, as I was saying, girls, Eve will use her fingers, feet and body to get you off if you’re interested in experimenting with her. I’d be a hypocrite if I didn’t explicitly say it. That said, I have zero desire to see any of you get your freak on with her. So, don’t do it in the public parts of the house, okay? Either your bedrooms or the downstairs bathroom. Eve will never say no to screwing. Any time, any place, when she’s available, she’ll do her best to please. If none of you choose to experiment with her, that’s fine, but getting feedback on her woman-to-woman skills would be very helpful.”

“I’ll do it, Daddy,” Maddie offered, stunning me with her offer.

My sister swings both ways? Did NOT need to hear that!

“But I definitely want to play with them big ol’ titties and stick things in her vag,” Maddie licked her lips in eager expectation.

“Nothing goes inside Eve that wouldn’t fit inside you, Maddie,” Dad warned my older sister.

I wondered how Dad would police that particular rule. The thought made me shudder.

I had become so involved in the conversation that I’d actually forgotten that Eve was still squatting, keeping an eye on us. She had held the squat for more than half an hour. Her thighs had to be burning like fire!

When I looked at her, I saw that the ivory white skin halfway to her nipples was red because she was blushing so hard. I didn’t understand that.

Sure, we were talking about fucking her, but she was a slave. A trainee, as we’d grown up thinking of them. Dad had said she’d come to terms with being a cum-chaser and she practically dreamed of getting fucked 24/7 so why was she so embarrassed? Could there be something else wrong with her?

“Hey, Dad. Is Eve okay?” I asked, drawing his attention.

Dad looked at Eve, smiled, and turned his attention back to me.

“I think stupid little twat is fighting the urge to cum, son. Eve’s secondary is humiliation,” He laughed.

“Secondary?” I asked, not having any idea what Dad was talking about.

“Yeah. Primarily, she’s a masochist, but she learned to be that. Her secondary is her natural kink. Eve gets off on humiliation. It was never learned, but a kink that came naturally to her, like being heterosexual comes naturally to you. A secondary can be anything, and there are a lot of choices from eating out another slut’s cum filled clam to watersports. Dominique? Her secondary was taking it up the ass. A lot of women enjoy it, but she preferred it. She loved getting her asshole destroyed, and that probably has a lot to do with why she likes being taken and dominated.”

I was fascinated by how primal the slave’s desires were as she rutted like a horny dog in heat. My father looked down his nose at her while she degraded herself and begged.

“What you’re seeing is Eve fighting to keep herself from spontaneously orgasming. What we’re talking about is highly embarrassing to her. Either that or she needs to take a shit,” Dad laughed again.

“Need to shit, dumbass?” Dad asked Eve. The way he asked made me think that he was being intentionally rude and crass to feed her humiliation kink.

Eve looked back at Dad for probably three full seconds before she hesitantly nodded.

“Well fucking go use the bathroom before the butt-plugged pops out on the kitchen floor, and I am forced to make you lick up your mess.”

Eve pantomimed her thanks by clasping her hands in a prayer motion, and sprang to her feet. She raced to the nearest bathroom like her ass was on fire and going to explode.

“You wouldn’t really make her lick up poo, would you, Daddy?” Maddie asked as she heard the downstairs bathroom door click shut.

“Not unless I was willing to take the hood off, and that’s not going to happen today. I just find that the mental picture is as good for stimulation as the act itself. Didn’t you find the idea of that pretty gross?”

“It made me want to puke, Daddy!” Maddie admitted in her lispy baby voice.

“So now imagine being in Eve’s heels except that Eve knows I could make her do that in front of you guys.

“That’s mean, Dad,” Dani took up for Eve.

“You’d never really, would you?” Marie tacked on the end.

 
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