One of the Best Stories You Will Probably Ever Read
Copyright© 2025 by Eddie Davidson
Chapter 1
Coming of Age Sex Story: Chapter 1 - I didn't write it, Mike McGifford did. He gave me permission to edit and illustrate. When I read it, I thought to myself, "This is the best story I might ever read." If you are a fan of my stories, this has everything I love. Luke's father trains women who volunteer to be submissives for weeks at a time to rich guys. His dad brings Eve home to evaluate her, and there is just something about Eve that changes things forever. The word pictures Mike creates are why I think it deserves the title.
Caution: This Coming of Age Sex Story contains strong sexual content, including Ma/Fa mt/ft Ma/ft Teenagers Consensual BiSexual Heterosexual Incest BDSM DomSub Humiliation Light Bond Spanking Facial Sex Toys Illustrated
“So, who is she?” I asked my sister, Maddie.
“I dunno. That’s the point, right?” Maddie answered condescendingly, sounding annoyingly like Mom.
The woman that Dad was walking in the front door on the far side of the living room was almost naked but for stockings, heels, a collar, and a hood over her head, hiding her face and hair. Her mound was shaved totally bald, and the only thing that gave away her age was a C-section scar. She was another old slut, like Mom’s age or maybe older, but tan and fit like a tennis player who took really good care of herself, ate right, did Pilates, fucked a lot.
What stood out most other than the hood was her tan lines. This woman had the whitest skin behind tan lines that defined where a conservative bikini usually covered her tits and cunt.
I frowned at Maddie across the kitchen table, where we were doing our homework. She’s such a bitch, sometimes, stating the obvious to wind me up.
My sister Maddie has almost graduated from high school and is a pain in my ass. She thinks she knows everything because she skipped a year in school, and she treats me like a little kid, even though I’m only a year younger than her.
All Maddie ever talks about is which college has the best-looking guys, and how she can’t wait to strike out on her own. My mom gets a little wistful and melancholy about that, but our dad gruffly promises to help her pack.
I love it when he tells her not to let the door hit her where the good Lord split her! I’ve never seen her let anyone but our dad get away with talking to her like that.
Maddie seems to think that having big boobs and an ass she can clap makes her an adult or something. She orders me around, tries to make me do her chores, and ignores me at school whenever she’s not calling me a dweeb in front of her friends.
I suppose she’s right, most hot girls walk all over guys, and she’s notorious for doting over a guy until he wants her – and then she doesn’t want him.
She likes to joke that her potential new boyfriend didn’t pass her test. I always tell her that her test shouldn’t be hard like a mid-term, and then Dad will joke that she’s easy like an open-book quiz.
We can goof on each other that way, but my theory is that Maddie’s test is set up so nobody can pass because she doesn’t want to get close enough to anyone for very long – so she can avoid getting her feelings hurt.
I told her that once, and she called me Oprah for a week, and told me she just likes to fuck around, and relationships are a bore.
Her being a condescending slut isn’t Maddie’s biggest fault, though. Oh no! My big sister still acts like a little kid around Dad. It’s so unfair. She has Dad wrapped around her little finger. She smiles sweetly, puts on her angel face and calls him Daddy with something skin to a lisp, and he calls her his little princess. But then she will turn around where he can’t see her, give me the finger and poke her tongue out at me like a five-year-old.
All the boys at school have been blinded by Maddie’s act, too. Sure, she’s hot as far as sisters go, but no one at school sees through her like I do. No one sees the bitch. Oh no, they just see the smart, popular girl.
My friends will not shut up about how pretty she is, her smile, her body, her radiant ebony hair, blah blah blah, and always wanting me to talk them up to her. As if!
Even my friend Evan, who I’m pretty sure is gay, has asked me to introduce him to Maddie a bunch of times lately. He’s always asking me to get her to text him for stupid shit like getting tutoring, or helping with school dances, or one time he wanted me to talk her into joining high school cheerleading.
I say I will, but I never do. Fuck that! Let him think she’s ignoring him. I’m really doing Evan a favor. Maddie’s trouble with a capital T, but he refuses to listen when I tell him that. Nor can I tell him she’s a slut. Family secrets and all.
In a way, I’m glad Mom and Dad don’t allow friends over on school nights, or he’d be all up in her face. That’s the last thing we need.
What none of my friends know is that Dad has a business, and it’s the sort of business that would cause DFS to get involved if they ever found out. Dad is a trainer, but he trains people in sex stuff.
I’m sure as shit is not gonna say a word about it because Dad occasionally brings his work home with him, like today, when Mom’s off on a business trip. I’m not too sure what Mom does, but it’s got something to do with cosmetics, and she must travel a lot.
So, when Mom’s away, Dad brings a trainee home and makes her do crazy shit that always involves her being naked. Twice now, I’ve secretly wet my wick in one of those sluts.
Both times were when Dad had her tied up naked. The first slut was straddling a sybian, and he had to go out, leaving her bound to it in the living room.
The day that happened was when I thought I was alone at home. I walked into the living room and there she was. An old slut, another one probably nearly Mom and Dad’s age. She didn’t care I was seeing her humping a sybian and instead, she begged me to let her suck my cock.
Just like that. She didn’t know me, didn’t know my dad was her trainer or that I was his son or anything. She just begged me to let her suck it. What was I supposed to do? My first BJ was from a tied-up MILF riding a sybian in my own living room.
She obviously said nothing to Dad about it, or I would never have heard the end of it.
The second time was the same situation, me thinking I was home alone, but the woman was only a few years older than me, and she was left tied and gagged with her legs spread wide. I could see right into her hairy gash. She was so embarrassed when I walked in on her!
I was in a mood, so I hid my surprise and casually asked her if she wanted me to put my cock in her, as if I did it all the time. I never thought she’d nod, giving me the green light! Fuck, what a way to lose your virginity! I fucked her three times in less than 10 minutes. Afterwards, she never said anything to Dad either.
In retrospect, Dad had to have known. I left her with spunk running out of her pussy like a river. He never said a word about it, though. Still, he did not leave his trainees unattended after that. It’s been 2 months since that day. Which brings me back to now.
“Doesn’t it piss you off, Dad parading naked women through the house when Mom’s away, sis?” I asked, wondering why Maddie never complained to Mom.
Until then, I’d always thought women stuck together, and Maddie would be the first to run crying to Mom. Then I realized that would jeopardize Maddie’s position as Dad’s spoiled brat. A Brat who’d been promised a car for her birthday next month.
“Dad’s a professional Dom, Luke, but you wouldn’t know about grown-up stuff like that. Just stick to your cartoons and video games and let us adults do the adulting,” she replied dismissively.
“Fuck you,” I spat back.
“In your dreams, bro. I probably couldn’t even find your boner with a magnifying glass,” she laughed.
I kicked her shin under the table.
“Ow! I’m gonna tell Dad!” Maddie threatened.
It was a hollow threat, and we both knew it. One fixed rule in the house is that we didn’t ever interrupt Dad when he was working unless there was a fire or World War 3 has been announced on TV.
Of course, that wouldn’t stop her making out like I’d beaten her to a pulp when she shared the story at dinnertime. Still ... worth it.
Dinnertime in our house is sacred. Even when Mom’s away, the family all sits down together, and we share stories of how our day was. My little sisters Dani and Marie often hog the limelight with unrealistic tales that only 15-year-old twin girls can make up.
Yesterday they talked for 20 minutes about seeing Perry, their latest heartthrob rapper superstar, drive by the school in a convertible Rolls-Royce with a dozen groupies with him.
As if Perry wouldn’t have a chauffeur. Those girls got all the imagination and none of the brains in the family.
Our developing argument was immediately put on pause by unspoken agreement when Dad started coming toward us, holding the unknown woman’s leash.
Dad never outright introduced any of us to his trainees!
“Daddy?” Maddie asked when our father was close enough.
Her single word question made it abundantly clear we were both confused by him bringing his trainee to the dining room.
“Guess who is coming to dinner,” Maddie smirked with obvious amusement at the novelty of the situation. The double entendre of cumming to dinner wasn’t lost on me.
“Kids, I want you to meet...” he paused for a moment, deciding how to introduce us to the busty woman on the leash. “ ... Eve. She’s undergoing some additional training on how to be a better domestic slave. I need to see how she interacts with a regular family, so I’ve decided to use us as her test. Luke, can you please keep your dick out of this one without permission?”
I couldn’t help it. I blushed furiously. Dad didn’t have to say that in front of Maddie! Worse, he knew I’d done stuff with his previous trainees and now, so did Maddie.
At least Dani and Marie weren’t here to hear it since they were still at their friend’s place down the street. They would have never let me live it down as if Maddie would either.
Maddie’s grin told me Dad’s warning had made her day, but she quickly blanked her expression and turned her attention to Eve, who’d stopped to the side of Dad and a little behind him.
“Hi, Eve!” Maddie said as if she were excited to make the hooded and otherwise naked women’s acquaintance. “Love the shoes!”
To me, it was a surreal experience, like Maddie met hooded slaves every day, and she could overlook the weirdness of the moment.
The woman subtly nodded without a word, but her upper chest pinkened. She was as embarrassed as me!
If the hood hadn’t been almost skin tight with a closed zipper from the top of the back of her head to the bottom of her neck and the only openings two eye slits that didn’t even allow me to see her eye color, and two small nose holes, I could easily imagine her cheeks, ears, and neck would have been red too.
“Eve is gagged under the hood, guys. A domestic slave is to be seen, not heard,” Dad explained. “I want you to just be yourselves around her and treat her like you’d treat any other slave. And to be clear, no punishing her until we’ve had a proper discussion at dinner. Which reminds me, where are the girls? Up in their room? I’d like them to meet Eve before she starts dinner prep,” Dad wondered out loud.
We would be punishing her? I know my mouth dropped open in surprise. Dad’s words echoed around in my brain, making any other thought impossible.
“They’re at Macy’s. They know they have to be home by 6, Daddy,” Maddie told Dad, somehow affecting that change in her voice that’s tailored especially for him. Maybe she hadn’t heard what Dad had said about punishing Eve?
Her words snapped me out of it. Maddie was so used to manipulating Dad that she could add something, almost a lisp, to her speech, mid-sentence, when turning her attention to Dad. Still, she was clearly brown nosing the way she jumped in before I could tell him where my sisters were. I mentally growled at Maddie.
“Oh, okay. Well, I guess they’ll just have to wait to meet her. Eve, get busy,” he told the woman, dropping her leash and expecting her to just do as she’d been told with no regard to how weird what he was asking of her was.
Eve moved her head slightly in Dad’s direction, did the tiny nod thing again, and then stepped forward towards the kitchen.
As she passed my chair, her butt cheek very nearly grazed my arm, making my cock take note. I could smell the scent of arousal on her, and after she passed me, I saw the half-healed welts on her butt. Eve had very recently been whipped or something.
Eve didn’t need further instruction. She ignored the dangling leash, went to the fridge to see what was in there, then opened the freezer doing the same. Finally, she opened the walk-in pantry and disappeared inside, returning a moment later with some vegetables.
A short time after that, she had a chopping board out and was slicing vegetables. It was as if she’d been born in a kitchen and intuitively knew where everything she needed was located. Dad left her to it and retreated to his study.
Mom’s a great cook. From the smell of things, I could tell Eve is, too. By the time my sisters got home, my tummy was grumbling, and I couldn’t wait to dig into whatever Eve was making. It smelled awesome!
Maddie had spent a few minutes trying to talk to Eve before giving it up when Eve didn’t reply with anything other than a nod or a head shake.
She did let her true personality shine through, which made me smile, when she got pissed at Eve for not answering her despite knowing Eve was gagged.
Maddie told Eve she was a stupid cunt and flipped her off before getting up from the table and heading for her room, leaving her homework sitting there.
Maddie never would have talked like that to an adult nor left such a mess on the table if Mom had been home. It made me smile. Eve had gotten under Maddie’s skin like Maddie did to me on the regular.
I couldn’t leave the table myself. I had a ringside seat watching Eve cook. Despite being so hard my cock was getting painful, I didn’t care. I was banking on constant views of Eve’s perfect ass, fabulous tits, and hard nipples for what I knew was going to be an epic jerk off session at bedtime.
When she bent down to put the food in the oven, I was looking directly between her ass cheeks at her bald peach, and Eve had a butt plugged back door. I about creamed myself without even touching my junk!
A butt plugged asshole meant Eve was no stranger to anal sex. My fantasies went into hyperdrive, imagining my cock in place of the plug. I was studying Eve so intently that I didn’t even notice my sisters arriving home.