Chapter 24: Friday, May 24, 2024

By the time Eve and Will got home from work and had a quick dinner, neither felt like doing anything even though it was the weekend. They sat heavily onto their recliners in front of the television and looked for something to watch.

As Will clicked away on the remote control, Eve asked, “Did you ever go back and look at that site to see if we got any comments about the story we wrote?”

“You know, I have not looked since the night we posted. Let me go get my laptop.”

Will tossed the remote to Eve before going to collect his computer. When he returned he sat on the couch and motioned for Eve to join him. He typed for a few seconds then turned his screen slightly so they could read any messages.

“Wow,” Eve said in surprise, “we have eleven messages!”

Will clicked on the message icon to see eleven unread messages. He clicked on the first one.

“Loved the story. Wish I had a neighbor willing to give me a hand.”

The next, “Jacked off to this one thinking about those naked nubile neighbors and what I’d do with them.”

The comments continued in a similar vein until the last message.

“Are you two going to write another one? The Pounder is great, but would love to live vicariously through another one of your sex-scapedes.” It was from Slippery Silver. The message had an image of a very large dildo buried in a pussy. A post-script said, “Maybe this will help inspire you knowing what it does to me – of course with a little help.”

Eve reached under the laptop and stroked Will.

“How are you getting so lucky. Two unsolicited pics of pussy.”

Will was starting to grow.

“See if Short and Stubby posted anything.”

Will clicked to the new story list. About halfway down the first page he found a new story by Short and Stubby from two days ago.

“Here you go,” he said as he clicked on the title.

“This one is fairly short, even so, it will take you longer to read it than it took for me to blow my load. Enjoy.”

S&S went on to describe his ride home on the train over the weekend. He had gone downtown to a concert and decided to use the train to avoid parking. It also meant he could drink without having to worry about driving home.

“After the concert, I got on the train and found a seat near the rear. A gorgeous redhead sat across from me, wearing a short skirt and shiny silk blouse. She asked if was at the concert. When I said, ‘huh,’ she laughed and said I must have been since my ears must be ringing as badly as hers.”

Eve had pulled Will’s shorts down and was absentmindedly stroking him as she kept a slow steady rub going on her nether region.

“After the first stop the majority of the passengers got off. The woman looked to her left and realized we had no one within ten feet. She looked back to me, grinned with an evil smirk, then spread her legs. She wasn’t wearing panties!”

At that revelation, Eve started to stroke both Will and herself harder.

“She looked deliberately at my crotch, then made eye contract and raised an eyebrow. I unzipped my fly and fished out my hard rod, stroked less than ten times and shot my load.”

Eve had her eyes half-closed as she neared orgasm.

“She plunged a finger inside her wet hole and quickly climaxed as we arrived at our next stop.”

Eve moaned loudly as she came.

“The woman stood, pulled her skirt down and gave me a little wave as she exited the train.”

Will took over for Eve and jacked off until he also came.

Eve reached for her phone and took a picture of Will’s cum-covered hand and dick. She then pointed it to her pussy and spread her lips to show the results of her climax. She texted both photos to Will.

“Send yours to Slippery and mind to S&S.”

Will did as instructed.

“Slippery – Thanks for the photo. Here’s what it did to me. A story will be coming later.”

He sent a similar note to Short and Stubby. “My wife loves your writing. Here’s what you did to her.”

Will and Eve cleaned up, then talked about what their next story should be about. Will started an outline but before they could write any text the messenger beeped. It was a message from S&S. An image of a very short but very thick dick covered in cum was attached. All it said was, “Thanks.”