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Details for ‘Coming Home’ by Ernest Bywater

Size: 11 KB
Word Count: 2,221
Downloads: 20760
Weekly: 9
Votes: 1593
Score: 8.61
Voted: No
Father's been away 3 years. His young family's meeting him at the airport. --- Bad Fred, said --- It's poignant, and you hit the right notes. If I didn't know it was your story and trust you, I would have drifted away in the first few paragraphs. It moved slowly. It was lovely, but it wasn't hitting my "what happens next?" buttons. Well, until the end when it all comes together. Readers who stick with it will be rewarded. Set in Australia.
Genre: Suspense
Tags: Fiction, Vignettes, Slow, Workplace, Military, Politics
Sex Contents: No Sex
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