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Author's Description:
This isn't erotica, just a love story that I wrote in high school.
Size: 27 KB (5,400 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Fiction

Review by smokeaknz   [other reviews by smokeaknz]

Reviewed:


There is not much one can say about a story this good. Beautifully paced perhaps? Excellent construction? Both apply. No noticeable typos or grammar errors. Just a really, really good story. Well written and satisfying to read. Just the right length for a short relaxing break from work or play. Give yourself a break: read this story. Then wonder like me why the author is not accepting messages from the site, because I for one would really like to thank him or her for a truly wonderful experience.

Thank you "raplucknett", whoever you are.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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