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Having had an accident at birth that leaves him with mental and physical challenges, a young man copes with a world where some people are kind but more people try to take advantage of him.
Size: 239 KB (46,950 words)
Genre: Coming of Age
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, mt/Fa, Teenagers, Tear Jerker, Revenge, First, Petting, Size, Slow

Review by anim8ed   [other reviews by anim8ed]

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This story is twisted. a roller coaster ride of emotions and a mix of characters from naive innocence to self-centered evilness with quite a few genuinely good people in between.

On the technical side I have no complaints though some of you may have trouble with the dialogue as it is reflective of the main character's disabilities. Moving onto the plot we are given plenty of problems for the main character to overcome with a few twists to keep it interesting. The story does lean a little to the dark side in places, both emotionally and by actions so do not go in expecting only sunshine and rainbows.

I enjoyed the story though I wish it were longer and had a little more depth.

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