Art imitates life and vice versa. Their relationship was straight out of Bizarro World and promised to get even weirder, posed for an audience. An accidental but unavoidable rite of passage with a near stranger becomes quite enjoyable. The instructor approves something powerful she witnessed but never really understood. Ignorance might be bliss, but innocence lost is more fun. 2014 Clitorides Winner, Best Erotic Story. WOW!
Size: 38 KB (7,003 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Reluctant, Heterosexual, First, Exhibitionism, Public Sex, School, Nudism
Review by striker24 [other reviews by striker24]
Reviewed:
I read this story because it's the first part of a longer story (I haven't bothered getting invested in short stories lately). That being said, I'm not taking into account the length of the story in this review.
What a great start to the series! Shy, innocent virgin from an all-girls Catholic high school. She sounds like a real cutie... very petite, lean, perky boobs, red hair, shaved. Pushing herself to overcome her shyness and repressive upbringing and blossoming into a wonderfully responsive and sexual being.
I mostly love where the story is going too. Karen also sounds amazing and the three of them moving into a house together sounds like fireworks waiting to happen. On one hand Amy seems sexually adventurous, almost guaranteed to get in on the action and really get the party started so to speak. On the other hand it seems like Amy is going to cause a lot of trouble and push things too far and possibly make the story too perverted for my tastes.
Time will tell, onward bound to part two in the series!
Review by RabbiRabbit [other reviews by RabbiRabbit]
Reviewed:
A totally unbelievable, impossible, incredibly insane wonderful story.
Of all the one page stories here on SOL it is most definitely my favorite.
As a scene setter, or tory introduction it is incomparable. It is so ridiculous it is probably based on a real event. Plus, no typos.
