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Author's Description:
Geoff Brown's long-term partner walks away, leaving him depressed and demoralised. His boss sends him to the doctor, telling him not to come back to work without the doctor's approval. The doctor's response is to sign him off work with a list of instructions, concluding 'Use it, or lose it."
Size: 64 KB (12,193 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Slow

Review by burka_oz   [other reviews by burka_oz]

Reviewed:


A young female Russian university student, beautiful but left in the family way by an uncaring male. A more mature guy. His wife left him possibly because he was going to seed and seriously unhealthy. His boss sent him home for a month to fix himself and his life.

A friendly escort agency madam showed him a new start to life and later he was asked to take on a boarder, a very sweet and pregnant Russian student.

Yes, if you are a romantic fool like me then you can imagine the way things develop. Go on, imagine away, I'm not telling. You can read it for yourself ;)

I have been reading Tedbiker's stories for many years. I don't recall this one but Ted is a very stable author that you can guarantee a good read with all of his tales. I am sure that you will not be disappointed in working your way through his extensive catalogue of tales. When I last looked there were 12 pages so you have some reading ahead of you.

Standouts for me are his Dulcie series and his series about the Sailing Barges, 'Serendipity World and 'Jenni' are another great series. Something very different and perhaps darker are the 'Devastation Diaries' tales.

Some good sci-fi in the 'Fold Space' stories just in case that is your favourite genre as it is for me.

Whatever you read, enjoy it and please, let the author know that you appreciate his works.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8

Review by Derek Smith   [other reviews by Derek Smith]

Reviewed:


All of Ted's stories have one thing in common; they are always well written and make good use of the English language. Some, like this one, are written in what I think of as Ted's 'chatty style'. The reader could almost be sitting in a quiet pub or café, listening to him telling the story over a pint of good ale or a cup of coffee.

Ted has picked a slightly different plot, populated it with well portrayed characters and made it all believable.

I would have liked it to be longer, to prolong my enjoyment, but like all good stories, it came to the end where it logically should.

Well done Mr. Biker and thank you very much.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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