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Author's Description:
Our overworked home business owner hires a live-in housekeeper. He is pleasant but insists that it is his house, his rules. Her 'daughter' becomes quite the tease. 'Mom' gets competitive and ups the ante. However, the Boss hates a tease who can't deliver, so enforces a dress code. The Girls pay the embarrassing price, willingly, to their surprise. As do their friends when the new, very strict dress codes are enforced. The Boss is not unhappy when the teasing becomes a game. He can play, too.
Size: 908 KB (166,869 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, ft/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Science Fiction, Time Travel, Post Apocalypse, Extra Sensory Perception, Space, Mystery, Brother, Sister, Father, Daughter, MaleDom, Spanking, Light Bond, Group Sex, Harem, White Male, White Female, Oriental Female, First, Anal Sex, Exhibitionism, Public Sex, Workplace, Nudism

Review by RabbiRabbit   [other reviews by RabbiRabbit]

Reviewed:


There is a lot of fucking in this story. And there was a plot. Actually there are a number plots; not subplots, major plots. They just seem to merge.

It begins with a lot of fucking, which is really just autofocus's way of assembling the harem. Then the plot gets weird; so just when I thought there would be nothing but fucking young teenage girls shit hits the fan, which in no way prevents our hero from fucking more teenage girls, young teenage girls. And just when I though I had this figured out the plot shifts to an even more outrageous series of events.

And there is the joy of discussing neighborhood food in Manhattan, fucking yet more teenage girls and the plot gets weird again, but a different kind of weird.

Let's face it, it is right there in the description for all to see, it says quite clearly, "science fiction." I simply wondered when and how it was going to show up. It shows up, then it shows up again but different; did I mention he fucks a lot of teenage girls and even some that aren't teenage girls? Then you get more science fiction that is even stranger and more sex and then the book ends but the story doesn't. So I am going to read part dos tonight because a new semester starts tomorrow and I will not have time to sit down and read a long story on SOL in one day. Did I mention that I really like this story? I do.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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