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Author's Description:
Steward is sent back to Earth to convince a 14-year-old boy to sign up.
Size: 138 KB (26,064 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Military

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed:


Our near Bishop nearly loses it when he is asked (ask in the Navy really means 'do it now') to get a fourteen year old genius to volunteer by getting his CAP card.

The only problems are the Earth Firsters who capture his parents, holding them for ransom, in a complicated ruse which our hero's AI buddy takes care of brilliantly. After all he is a truly great contract negotiator.

Now I ask you, with a cast of such nicely written characters, can this be all JL can write of them? If so, what a waste.( hint, hint.)

Enjoy! Oh and sex is still eleven out of ten!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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