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Bret is an orphan scared at birth. Bret makes friends with Mike Miyagi a Tae Kwan Do Sensi. Bret while saving a young girl is forced to join the Marines for his own protection. The Marines have been forced to join the Television Networks in offsetting their expenditures. The Marines Games are a result of this joint venture. The majority of the story concerns Bret's participation in these games.
Size: 178 KB (32,570 words)
Genre: Coming of Age
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Sports

Review by therev   [other reviews by therev]

Reviewed:


A well developed story that gives hope to those who feel they are not "worthy". It feels that there is a lot of truth behind this story. That being said, it is a "feel good" story with good moral theme, with a great story underlying it.

I think that my 10 yr old granddaughter would like to read this. A very good read, highly recommended.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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