The continuing story of the Taylor Family for anyone who can't wait for the next chapter in FF4. This is fan fiction and not condoned by the actual Family Feud author. It probably does not relate in any way to what she'll write herself, but it provides a read for those like me who needed one.
Size: 69 KB (13,318 words)
Genre: Fan Fiction
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Reluctant, Lesbian, Heterosexual, Fan Fiction, Slut Wife, Incest, Mother, Son, Brother, Sister, Father, Daughter, BDSM, DomSub, MaleDom, Rough, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Food, Lactation, Exhibitionism, Big Breasts, Public Sex
Review by amandaserve [other reviews by amandaserve]
Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )
This wonderful story was written in July of this year.
I just noticed it when I did a search on the FF Universe. I am the author of Family Feud, and I was so flattered to see fan-fiction continuation. I know I am a bit of a biased reviewer in that I am the original author but at the same time I am also an expert on the storyline and I found this to be well done!!
The characters really came alive for me as I wrote the original FF story and I can tell for the author (StacieLove)- they did as well when they did the fanfic.
She captured the spirit of the characters perfectly. There were times I laughed and times I was really in suspense with what would happen next. It was playful and the plot itself moved along briskly! So much so I would be hoping the chapter would be longer.
I write stories I would love to be able to read, and this one was exactly that - something I loved to read.
I think Stacie writes sexuality much better than I do. This was truly very erotic in several places. She quickly ramped up the story and pulled you in.
This is a short story and it picks up sometime in FFIV while the girls are working the motel. It could easily be seen as lost chapters that belong in the main story because it revisits what happens with Delilah and Mr. Bitterman.
(The author was dead-on with their theories about Bitterman and kudos for those observations!).
I would love to see more of this story and ones like it that theorize about different points in the timeline and elaborate or just play around with the characters.
It made me long for a FFV.
TECHNICAL QUALITY:
The author had a few very minor errors in the story (saying Jamie when Wendy was speaking) but in truth - I have a whole bunch of those and I am always on the look out for those errors - it's difficult to proof your own work and catch them.
All in all - you will easily be able to figure out what is meant from context and the grammar/spelling is great. It was a pleasure to read from a technical perspective.
