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The third installment: Britt has finished school, built a business and now is ready to settle down and figure out what is in store for the country's newest billionaire?
Size: 566 KB (112,286 words)
Genre: Time Travel
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Fa/Fa, Fa/ft, BiSexual, Humor, Rags To Riches, Time Travel

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed:


I deliberately waited to see the series closed out before saying anything. After having read all three of the Hindsight 20/20 I will now open my mouth.

This is after all a Do-Over. The ideas put forth in marketing are valid and have been in use for a long time.

The story line with the invention of Chicken and Waffles was fun, since that is one of my favorite guilty pleasures.

The story line of the photography makes me smile since it is constant in another story.

Finding his way in high school and college with his fore knowledge was interesting but he only used it as an aid, not depending on it totally. Although the sports book is a nice nest egg.

The one thing that I found was going on to "silly" is his view of the transportation industry. Frankly, his views and ideas for the trucking industry are/were impossible to make happen.

Companies like Old Dominion, R + L Carriers, Estes, are already doing the regional and Over The Road routes. The monopoly the was proposed couldn't happen so that sent the story straight to silly.

The sex was plenty and while I didn't ponder on it I did watch the D/s portion and found it to be well done. Even when he got plastered by the young black man who didn't "get it"

While it seems like I am blowing him out of the water, I'm not. The story is very readable and remember, IT'S FICTION.

Read it, You'll like it. Some of the racial shenanigans may not please you but TOUGH. Get over it.

No hankies.

I say again for possible penetration: Read it, You'll like it.

'sheets

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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