Author's Description:
The story is set in a fantasy world comparable to medieval earth. The main protagonists are brother and sister. Direct descendants of a God, they are fighting destiny to choose their own future. There is blood, war, magic, lots of sex, action and adventure, but mainly it is a character driven story and a fantasy case study on schizophrenia.
Size: 900 KB (168,674 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Mult, Magic, Mind Control, NonConsensual, High Fantasy, Incest, Brother, Sister, DomSub, Rough, Harem, Anal Sex, First, Size, Slow, Violent

Review by striker24   [other reviews by striker24]

Reviewed:


I'm not into DomSub and strongly dislike abusing women, but I still love this story. It's a bit too dark and hopeless for me at times, and the MMC is stupid (I hate the stereotypical clueless/stupid men meme) and turns into a bit of a bitch at times as well, but it ticks so many boxes for me (fantasy, gods and demigods, supernatural and magic, middle ages level civilizations, love, harem, lots of sex, power fantasy, etc.) that I couldn't stop reading this story and consider it to be amazing.

They author has a very interesting writing style and maintains excellent levels of suspense, mystery and tension. The characters are interesting as well (strong but with flaws), especially the relationship dynamic between the two main characters...us against the world no matter what. My main gripes were that the sharing and submissive bullshit with Queen Leandris and the extended teasing with Nyssa's virginity (Athea's too but thankfully that was taken care of in a more reasonable timeframe) was starting to piss me off a bit as well...it was going on for far too long and was past the point of being contrived (not to mention repetitive and boring with the number of words wasted on bringing it up over and over again). A lot of that is due to my lack of patience and I eventually got over it later on as the story progressed and most other relationships developed to my enjoyment.

Overall I really enjoyed this story and gave it a 10/10.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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