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Author's Description:
Bobby is a normal 19 year old man from a normal family. Well maybe not quite so normal. Bobby's sister Wendy possesses a genius unseen since Leonardo Da Vinci! Wendy hides her light under the bushel of being a bubbly busty blonde centerfold. Let's ignore Wendy, for this is Bobby's story! His world gets turned upside down when he and his buddy Alan sneak into Wendy's lab.
Size: 237 KB (44,096 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Reluctant, Science Fiction, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Pregnancy, Cream Pie, Voyeurism, Body Modification, Transformation

Review by Paw Writer   [other reviews by Paw Writer]

Reviewed:


I had never read any stories by Honey Moon, so I looked her up and found that she(?) is mostly known for writing hermaphrodite stories. This one isn't, but it is somewhat close.

it IS a romantic and sometimes funny story about what happens when a trip through a matter transmitter goes wrong for a guy and how it affects him and his best guy friend.

To explain anything else, I must spoil the story & say that it turns him into a gorgeous girl, with all the emotions and hormones that come along with it.

It is interesting and sometimes funny as Bobbie explores being a girl. His(Her) best buddy soon finds out what has happened and they still share the same things, but how they do it evolves into something entirely different.

The sex is kind of slow as is usual in a romance, but it is very well done.

The editing is very good. I found very few errors.

The concept is very well handled and I would recommend this story to anyone.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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