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Author's Description:
A woman first loses her inhibitions, and then becomes the mate of a vampire.
Size: 66 KB (12,787 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/ft, Consensual, BiSexual, Fiction, Vampires, Incest, Mother, Son, Father, Daughter

Review by Safe_Bet   [other reviews by Safe_Bet]

Reviewed:


Well now... I really wasn't planning to, but I ended up enjoying this story a LOT.

Synopsis: Mother of two teens and housewife begins the journey of discovering her sexuality (boy does she ever!). Her journey leads her to a club where she catches the interest of the owner who is a vampire and who turns her. She then continues on her sexual journey with her new vampire lover and many others. (This is almost a two story "mashup".)

Plot: The plot goes pretty much as you'd imagine, without a lot of twists and turns. There are enough, however, for this story to rate a "much sex" rating as opposed to being a true stroke story, in spite of there being a LOT of graphic sex.

Technical: There were a fair number of "Oopsies", grammatical errors and "I better re-read that because it doesn't make sense"es. None of them effected the story a lot, they just created a bit of chronic annoyance.

Appeal: A couple of issues "displeased" me: There is snuff in this story and it is not tagged as so (even though it is pretty benign "snuff" there are still two dead people!) and some of situations seemed pretty contrived solely to lead into the next sex scene which is why I'd really classify this story as being "semi-stroke".

All of ^^THAT^^ said, I STILL liked it a lot and it is worth the read. If you enjoy incest stories, LOTS of sex (with at least some sort of plot) and things paranormal this would be a good one for you!

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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