Sometimes the routine things bring a surprise. And the familiar brings more surprises as Dave's disaster brings him to an unexpected place with his young neighbor
Size: 253 KB (48,104 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Slow
Review by anim8ed [other reviews by anim8ed]
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Crunch is a good name for this story as that is where it all starts. If you are familiar with oyster50's stories then you know where this story is headed. If you are not then this is a good first read of his material.
As this is an earlier work by oyster50 it does have some technical issues with editing and consistency. They are minor issues that have little effect on the story overall. Plot is a little thin for my taste. After the initial conflict most of the rest are just little hiccups.
All in all a good short story that is a good starting place before reading later works. Oyster50's later work goes much longer and more in depth so if you like this one I am sure the rest will be a joy to read as well.
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