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Loose Cannons by Lazlo Zalezac

Author's Description:
Four people are drowning their sorrows in a downtown bar. Two robbers choose the wrong place to rob. All hell breaks loose and that's only the beginning.
Size: 256 KB ( ~ 48,545 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Cheating, Slow, Violent

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2011-01-24 - (Review Updated: 2011-01-24)

Lazlo has the knack of instilling his characters with life, the envy of a lot of quasi writers. One is pleasantly surprised that a simple, well reasonably simple, hypothesis can turn into four people's emotional and life changing acts against criminals robbing a bar where the foursome are in the process of drowning their sorrows in 'the demon rum.'

The life changing acts are well rewarded, and Laz's words come to life as usual.


Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10