Author's Description:
A teenage boy suffers a huge loss of family and starts to coast through life. Events happen to him, and they cause him to learn things and decide to join life again. This is an adventure story, but does have more too it than that. Most of the sex scenes are in the first quarter of the story and contribute to some sub-plots and show changes in Al's behaviour. 280,000 words. It involves sport and school too.
Size: 1413 KB (286,011 words)
Genre: Coming of Age
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Mult, Teenagers, Consensual, Hypnosis, Slavery, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, School, Sports, Workplace, Incest, Harem, Polygamy/Polyamory, Swinging, Safe Sex, Nudism, Politics, Violent

Review by Knight6   [other reviews by Knight6]


This example of Ernest Bywater is a great collage of different story types, it also shows his Aussie roots throughout the wording of some things as well as the spelling.

If you’ve never read a story using some of the “Queens English” then you might have a harder time at first but you catch on pretty quickly as he does explains some things throughout the story.

I personally was drawn to the story because I love all the Asian and their were many examples in this story. I love the twist at the end that leads to other great stories.

I recommend for those looking for a great entertaining read cause this’ll fit that bill perfectly.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8


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