Through the Looking Glass by StephanieB

Author's Description:
In 2061, a young girl goes through MORFS in the orbital city of Tenkei. Unfortunate, she has no control of her new powers and threatens the safety of the entire city. Todd Callaway is called in by Tetsuo Sakamoto to save the city and her live. He soon finds out there is more going on than he’s being told!
Size: 129 KB (24,397 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Science Fiction

Review by Quasirandom   [other reviews by Quasirandom]

Reviewed:


The most powerful man on or off Earth bends his pride and asks Earth’s best paraphysicist for help: a girl’s newly awakened MORFS power is out of control, endangering both herself and his space station. Will they help her in time? And at what cost?

Sidebar: MORFS is an open shared universe, taking place in the decades following a plague, Massive Ontogenetic Regulation Failure Syndrome, that frequently causes infected teenagers (after the initial epidemic, only teenagers are affected) to morph unpredictably. Sometimes it’s just a shift in appearance, sometimes it’s a hybridization with animal traits, and sometimes they gain psychic powers—some of which lead to superhero adventure yarns. Most writers in the universe have migrated off SOL, but of the stories still here, there’s a couple excellent tales, including this one.

Unlike most MORFS stories, this isn’t about a teenager coming to terms with their transformation. The main characters are adults dealing with (and helping her deal with) a kid’s frightening new powers, but the adults are front and center. It’s a problem-solving science-fiction tale, where engineering (and theoretical physics) is the main point.

It’s a good story, but not a good introduction to the MORFS universe—it relies a little too much on knowing the premise. Plus, well, the last chapter is filled with non-plot-relevant callbacks to (and characters from) other stories, something I find rarely handled well even when I’m deeply invested in a series. But regardless, it’s a good story—and recommended.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
 

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